thank you very much for your version. your instrumental is nice but i think i can give you the same feedback as i have given to another remixer here @Jejesus01. From the beginning till the end your instrumental sounds the same. it is pretty monetome. there is no diversity and no distinction from what part are the verses or chorus lines. If you would offer this to a Rnb record label. they would reject this right away. again the begin is there but it can have much more improvements
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