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Not gonna lie, dope af! Would be killa with a rap! Love that orchestral sound! Proper talent!

Well yes....you are definitely a beginner. Maybe look up some youtube tutorials on song structure and chord progressions. Keep at it, if you're truly passionate about music you will get better. Took me 3 years before I made anything decent.

Like the beat, feel like it would sound better with a rap.

For anyone reading, I'd check this one out!

Overall good idea. Too much going on in the percussion and it gets a little repetitive. I can tell that was a drum machine.

I like the vocal chops! Yeah nonprofit is fine to upload.

Woah buddy, There's like 4 different scales going on at the same time. A scale change can be good but only if it's one at a time.

Taking into consideration this is your first go at house. It's not bad. Vocals are slightly out of time in certain parts but it's in key. I also like the drop because it's a bit different and unique.

I like the instrumental but I don't think my vocal fits here. Out of key and slightly out of time.

For an un-mixed, un-mastered and un-finished track it doesn't sound too bad. I like the easy listening club feel it has.

Like the piano and chord progression! The drop loses me a bit. The melody is pretty intense and the bass is lacking. For a song like this the energy comes from that deep bass. The melody doesn't need to be fast and crazy, just catchy and easy to remember. Not hating, just throwing advice out there. Keep creating! It can only make you better!

Good stuff man! Very bright happy sounding dance music. I still go back to that (Above the clouds) remix you did. Such a catchy vocal chop!

I respect you're making you own style through DnB. However the vocals feel out of key and time. Makes it harder to fully enjoy the track. Also the clipping of the chords at the start is very unpleasant and not a good way to draw the listener in. Just some pointers.

Yea as long as it's non commercial.

Very catchy track man! Got that good dance energy. I'll keep that in mind!

I don't really listen to trance/psy so I may not be the best at describing this. Good atmosphere! I like the different elements in this, keeps it from sounding boring. Sounds well mixed!