DustyLyfe

I think you have a good voice man, this song has great potential! I agree with Dean though some variation needs to be implemented to keep things interesting. Music is subjective so take anything anybody says with a grain of salt as it is just their opinions. A common "rule" followed is most modern music is something called the 2 loop rule, meaning every "2 loops" something needs to change whether that be adding energy, taking it away, adding different rhythms, adding drums, taking away drums. All of these change the "feel" of the song and keep things interesting from beginning to end. With that said some producers can use this "rule" to much and end up changing the entire dynamic of the song so that isn't good either so try to find a nice middle ground. Again though great voice and vocal melodies I see great things coming!

This might sound like a weird comment but if you are familiar with the PC game "Escape from Tarkov" this sounds like it belongs in menu music lol. I know you have it listed as hip hop but (at least my interpretation) I get cinematic vibes from this. I really particularly love that arp like instrument in the background that fades in and out. Well done!

This is really good! Extra fire for sure.

This gives me Shaggy vibes with a little bit of Sublime influences. The production sounds pretty clean and the melodies go well together. I enjoyed it thanks!

I really like this one got spacey chill out vibes, I think I zoned out for a minute while listening to this lol. Good job!

Great piece man I enjoyed the listen. This one has such epic vibes. Well done!

I have no clue what you are saying in the track but it does not matter it sounds amazing. The tones and progressions are perfect. Some parts are slightly distorted though it sounds like maybe you used a AI mastering tool and some parts are to loud causing distorting or "clipping". An easy fix though. Again super fire track man good job!