first of all, it's great...not only because of the brilliant loop but for the atmosphere...but...you should use some bass (synth) and some brass (trumpet, sax) in some places...it would be the winner if you could find some vocs on it...anyway...it sounds cool on it's own too...
Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate you taking your time to share your thoughts with me.
I will definately try out some different brasses, and add in a synth for the bass (as you said), and re-upload the beat when I'm finished. So please check my profile again in a few days ;).
Also, it would honestly be a dream coming true if some one would be interested in adding the vocals to this beat, or any beat of mine for that matter.
First of all, congrats for the opener...not bad but so good...:-)
I'm not an expert of this kinda chill but this is very percussive and groovy...the harmonies are very cool but on my humble opinion that change at around 0.44 and later are a bit weird if you look at severely the scale...
Another thing is the volume...I know that nowadays there is the loudness war but it's a bit too much...
All in all, great summertime track and hope my words could be a building help...if not delete my comment somehow within 3 seconds...:-)
Thanks for the feedback! Since making this I've gotten better at Eqing so my songs aren't as loud, but I do seem to have trouble with my transitions :p
With peace in my heart I ask you, you like this guitar tune???
This could be a sensational number with another guitar voices...Amplitube 3 for example could give you 1000 choices for clean, dry, understanable, heavy tune...but if your best way, delete my comment somehow...:-)
No, we are not happy with the tone of the guitars :( We def need to get our shit together. We just get drunk and write/record right now nothing too serious. Mainly having fun but of course we would like to get the mix badass eventually. Any help would be appreciated.
Interesting report by asid...hmmm...I listened only once but for me this nearly distorted vocs fit for the mood...very much liked the third 'dubstepish' part...all in all, I will go back to see that vocs but the music is amazing...
I'm not trying to add vocs cause it'll be better for you larry, but let me tell you that this track is amazing on it's own too...clear that vocs could give it a big shot but it's beautiful on it's clearness and etherealness...
Thanks my friend. Yeah, I hear it at 4:07. The weird thing is I listened to the Master and it is not there. Must have happened during rendering. I will render it again and see if it is fixed.
Reminds me to one of my favourite rock/electro/ambient group, Stabbing Westward...amazing work, one of your best...frezing and dangerous but beautiful and deep...
that's cool>...I know that Juliet is one of the most unique person in this community and this track shows her genious...you did a great job to say 'thanx' :-)...you put those drums and some basses to her loops?...though the mix is outstanding...
Hi Danke! Glad to be back in Looperman and am happy to get help from you again. Thanks for taking time to listen and give your input. Indeed, the track is short and quickly transitions to the bridge. I still need to learn more so I can create a progression that will lead to the huge chorus you were mentioning. I was considering adding harmonies or even an acapella version of the song. Will keep in mind what you said when I create the next track. Thanks again!
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Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate you taking your time to share your thoughts with me.
I will definately try out some different brasses, and add in a synth for the bass (as you said), and re-upload the beat when I'm finished. So please check my profile again in a few days ;).
Also, it would honestly be a dream coming true if some one would be interested in adding the vocals to this beat, or any beat of mine for that matter.
Thanks again,
Jason
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on Come Inside with Iti Yati by Couchie
This is an amazing track...like the contrabass like tune and the guitars...the voice is simply brilliant...
Hats off, Danke
on Summer Night by reddescent
First of all, congrats for the opener...not bad but so good...:-)
I'm not an expert of this kinda chill but this is very percussive and groovy...the harmonies are very cool but on my humble opinion that change at around 0.44 and later are a bit weird if you look at severely the scale...
Another thing is the volume...I know that nowadays there is the loudness war but it's a bit too much...
All in all, great summertime track and hope my words could be a building help...if not delete my comment somehow within 3 seconds...:-)
Handshake, Danke
Here's my soundcloud if you're interested in more!
https://soundcloud.com/babblefactory
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Danke vagyok. Örülök hogy 1 újabb magyar produkciót hallgathatunk...:-)
és nem is akár milyent...nem értek a househoz de ez oda lett téve...jó hangja van a csajnak, jó a groovy és hát legyünk őszinték ez egy klasszis nóta eredetiben is...
Remélem még Ãrhatok a számaidról és ha 'featured' trackként jelölöd, valamint kommentálsz egy két nótát akkor sokkal többen meghallgatják majd a te nótáidat is...:-)
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on Poor House by TheParadigms
With peace in my heart I ask you, you like this guitar tune???
This could be a sensational number with another guitar voices...Amplitube 3 for example could give you 1000 choices for clean, dry, understanable, heavy tune...but if your best way, delete my comment somehow...:-)
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on Nature Trip by majorman
this sounds cool...is this your music or made by loops?
the only problem is that the start is weird a bit...
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thnx for comment
on Broken instrumental by larrybarrow31
huge feelings and fantastic piece of chill art...
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on Sounds of Nature by majorman
freezing but beautiful, could be the music of some extreme alpine trailer or stg like that...
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on March of The Orange AssHat by topvega
side note: at 4.07 stg isn't good with the drum...
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Thanks for the listen and comment.
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on trash by frenki
those riffs are like tones of bricks...
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