Danke

It was just a payed work (supposed to), I play in the Jazz band in real life, this isnt my type of material to made a whole song from.

But, tnx a lot.

I really appreciate that and it makes it easier to go on

Thanks for listen Danke! Any advice for bringing forward the vocals? I tend to just compress and increase higher frequencies.

Hi, Danke. Thanks for providing feedback on the track. If you look at the response to Nicolo's comment (HenryPascal) you will see the details about how I went overboard with processing all the vocal tracks in the project. This is NOT the way Jenna's original acapella sounds. Putting on too much reverb is a rookie error. I should know better! :)

I'm going to re-think the approach to the vocals and, as Nicolo suggested, work on the instrumentation to get more variation.

Thanks again,

Eric

Be sure to try

Thanks! It has one main important message, and it hits harder with a great subwoofer:) Lyrics were already added to it. This is just the instrumental

Yes, there is a synth bass, and you are right, the mix is not that good.

Thank you, but problem is that it is hard to me decide what is or not Chill out or other genres. Today is over 60-80 genres with subgenres?

As hard give track some nice name. ;)

And yes there are loot problems not only volume, but that need somebody with higher technical skills than my basic skills. ;) :/

Then don´t wory, constructive criticism is good if i able understand it with my weak english. ;)

That means a lot coming from you, Danke!

Rock on!

hahahaha yeah man :D

Thank you very much. I appreciate the helpful comment.

Thanks Danke, always appreciate your kind words :0)

The backing track was made first and I thought I'd give it an overly pretentious title just for a laugh and "Star Shaped Heart" seemed to fit that.
After listening to it a few times the words fell into place quite easily, at some point I'm going to record it somewhere they know what they're doing :0)

Thanks here a link to a better song that has vocals https://soundcloud.com/mayo-music/t-a-k-e-m-e-a-w-a-y/s-ZG9aR

I guess they were. Appreciate it tho

that would be good

Thanks for the feedback! I'm still working on mixing the vocals and what not and will definitely try out some bass in that part! Thanks again!

Hey Danke.

I think, after those bold and lovely words, I can live with a 9.5 rating. Can't win 'em all :p

Cheers,

TA

thx danke.....

Thank you Danke !