Danke

Thank you for the feedback, I do everything in my power to improve on myself so I can either help someone who can't make instrumentals so they can use it for themselves. Thanks again I appreciate it so much and I will sure as hell introduce some sort of singer/rapper one day

Kind Regards DARKWOLFMUSIC

Yes, it's true. On the headphones it seemed to be fine, but listening it, with the stereo speakers, I realized it.

Thanks for the comment. Yes it's a little short, because I usually make music on Instagram,where there's only 1min per video, so I got used to it :)

Hi danke,

thanks for your constructive comment! I guess you are right! The song will be more interesting with a chorus - perhaps with some strings or an other instrument in connection with the vocal line.

Best Regards
~ Rockman

Ha! Nice.

Handshake right back, sir!

Thanks Danke, hope you enjoyed it !!

Danke,
TY buddy.
Yes pets sure do have a way of working their way into your heart. They are always there for us. Lucy used to curl up at my feet when I was in my studio and when i was performing this song, out of habit I would look for her and then remember she was gone.
I am not ashamed to admit that I shed many tears in the studio doing this song and I think my raw emotion showed through in the recording.
Some people run for a bottle when they are sad....I run for my guitar lol...always have.
Mark.

Actually this was meant to be like sort of an interlude which is why its real short.
But yeah ill def work on the mix levels.
I appreciate it.

Yeah ,I’m with your opinion it’s monotonous ,cuz that just a preview,i will add another instrument, thanks for ur comment

I like the reverby snare in choruses and build-ups. It always makes things sound bigger and grander. The Pink Floyd sound was unintentional, but I'm always listening to The Wall at some point throughout the year.

OK, thanks for your advice, I'm working on it!

Danke, thanks for your very kind words!
Great fun that someone likes it.