Thank you for the feedback, I do everything in my power to improve on myself so I can either help someone who can't make instrumentals so they can use it for themselves. Thanks again I appreciate it so much and I will sure as hell introduce some sort of singer/rapper one day
this is super cool...my humble suggestion is that you should get back the overall volume of the mix or master and get the vocal in front of the music just a bit...
Thanks for the comment. Yes it's a little short, because I usually make music on Instagram,where there's only 1min per video, so I got used to it :)
I see it differently than my successful colleague ... :-) I don't think there is anything wrong with the strings, but the drum sounds to me from a distance ... I feel like he or she was offended and went to the forefront to play...:-) more deeps and some reverb on it maybe?
according to current Looperman rules you can only charge it on a standalone basis, if you have thought of it ??? anyway, a brilliant song initiative or advertising music...
a fantastic song, music and an incredibly out of place vocal on it ... of course good tone but I don't think it feels the music... and there is no explosion of the vocals...a huge chorus or stg like that...hope it didn't hurt...
thanks for your constructive comment! I guess you are right! The song will be more interesting with a chorus - perhaps with some strings or an other instrument in connection with the vocal line.
hahhh...fantastic piece...not really sad but hopeful for me...dogs and pets are our best friend...
we can't do them so badly that they don't want us indefinitely ...rest in peace Lucy...
Danke,
TY buddy.
Yes pets sure do have a way of working their way into your heart. They are always there for us. Lucy used to curl up at my feet when I was in my studio and when i was performing this song, out of habit I would look for her and then remember she was gone.
I am not ashamed to admit that I shed many tears in the studio doing this song and I think my raw emotion showed through in the recording.
Some people run for a bottle when they are sad....I run for my guitar lol...always have.
Mark.
it is very cool... but you should create this to the whole track...in this state it's only a snippet (cool snippet...) but there is a potential to get really rockin with this...and get that mix volume back a bit...:-)
fire but too short and my heart is bleeding very much for this fact...there is a huge potential in this track but you can't (didn't want to) reap the choices...incredibly cool mix and fantastic melodies from the synth/piano duel and finally someone who get the right bass for these kinda songs...bit trapish and lo-fi attitude can also be recognized but it is just lift the standard...
this is a cool vibe but it's a bit monotonous, knowing it's a lo-fi song...maybe another part to get a full song or stg like that...and the end is abrupt very much...
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than the song too...:-) great groovy and cool creativity...kinda uplifting chill...
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hats off, Danke
its always a pleasure to see your kind words on my tracks :)
hope you have a great day :)
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it could be a cool song, but it's horribly overdriven...get that volume button way back on the mix and upload again on my humble opinion...
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I know these short songs are in fashion lately but I would have listened to it anyway ... :-)
Danke
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I see it differently than my successful colleague ... :-) I don't think there is anything wrong with the strings, but the drum sounds to me from a distance ... I feel like he or she was offended and went to the forefront to play...:-) more deeps and some reverb on it maybe?
Danke
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thanks for your constructive comment! I guess you are right! The song will be more interesting with a chorus - perhaps with some strings or an other instrument in connection with the vocal line.
Best Regards
~ Rockman
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we can't do them so badly that they don't want us indefinitely ...rest in peace Lucy...
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TY buddy.
Yes pets sure do have a way of working their way into your heart. They are always there for us. Lucy used to curl up at my feet when I was in my studio and when i was performing this song, out of habit I would look for her and then remember she was gone.
I am not ashamed to admit that I shed many tears in the studio doing this song and I think my raw emotion showed through in the recording.
Some people run for a bottle when they are sad....I run for my guitar lol...always have.
Mark.
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But yeah ill def work on the mix levels.
I appreciate it.
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