First of all, congrats for steppin out of your comfort zone...this is amazing...donno trap so it is the comment I feel...groovy as rock and there is the tension as it has to be...it needs some vocs for sure...kinda mix speech/sing duel, I think...great work, congats with my handshake...
super brilliant song...for me it's more spring in it, than autumn but it's only my taste, perhaps...moody, positive song...technical advices up there from Joe...
brilliant, fantastic, outstanding, unique approach of lo-fi...one of the best track from this genre...though, that guitar intro is a bit out of the song in feeling but more in tone...but who cares? it's lo-fi...:-)
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Cheers! I was going to make it longer which is why the sudden ending. As for the bass slip, I made this pretty hasty so it's not as polished and I most likely missed little things.
Thank you for the feedback, I do everything in my power to improve on myself so I can either help someone who can't make instrumentals so they can use it for themselves. Thanks again I appreciate it so much and I will sure as hell introduce some sort of singer/rapper one day
this is super cool...my humble suggestion is that you should get back the overall volume of the mix or master and get the vocal in front of the music just a bit...
I see it differently than my successful colleague ... :-) I don't think there is anything wrong with the strings, but the drum sounds to me from a distance ... I feel like he or she was offended and went to the forefront to play...:-) more deeps and some reverb on it maybe?
according to current Looperman rules you can only charge it on a standalone basis, if you have thought of it ??? anyway, a brilliant song initiative or advertising music...
a fantastic song, music and an incredibly out of place vocal on it ... of course good tone but I don't think it feels the music... and there is no explosion of the vocals...a huge chorus or stg like that...hope it didn't hurt...
thanks for your constructive comment! I guess you are right! The song will be more interesting with a chorus - perhaps with some strings or an other instrument in connection with the vocal line.
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WILL SHOW TO MY 3RD CHILD WHO IS 4 NOW AND STILL BELIEVE IN MIRACLES...:-)
like Santa Claus and co...
thanx for this gift...
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I hope he'll like it. ;)
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First of all, congrats for steppin out of your comfort zone...this is amazing...donno trap so it is the comment I feel...groovy as rock and there is the tension as it has to be...it needs some vocs for sure...kinda mix speech/sing duel, I think...great work, congats with my handshake...
Danke
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than the song too...:-) great groovy and cool creativity...kinda uplifting chill...
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hats off, Danke
its always a pleasure to see your kind words on my tracks :)
hope you have a great day :)
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it could be a cool song, but it's horribly overdriven...get that volume button way back on the mix and upload again on my humble opinion...
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I know these short songs are in fashion lately but I would have listened to it anyway ... :-)
Danke
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I see it differently than my successful colleague ... :-) I don't think there is anything wrong with the strings, but the drum sounds to me from a distance ... I feel like he or she was offended and went to the forefront to play...:-) more deeps and some reverb on it maybe?
Danke
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according to current Looperman rules you can only charge it on a standalone basis, if you have thought of it ??? anyway, a brilliant song initiative or advertising music...
hats off, Danke
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thanks for your constructive comment! I guess you are right! The song will be more interesting with a chorus - perhaps with some strings or an other instrument in connection with the vocal line.
Best Regards
~ Rockman
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Handshake right back, sir!
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