OneVizun

Be your own lyric

Brisbane, Australia

Joined : 14th May 2007 - 19 years ago

Last Online : 30th Nov 2025 - 10 months ago

OneVizun comments on tracks

OneVizun has posted 208 comments on other peoples tracks.

Comments 101 - 125 of 208

OneVizun 29th Apr 2010 04:25 - 16 years ago

on FYEEE by BerBeatz

nicely done homie. Could spit some hard lyrics on it or even something heartfelt. Love the use of synths in here. (im a synth head) and the guitar is killer. the only thing i would add is a nice tom roll before the chorus hits. other than that a perfect beat.

Stay blessed

Vizun

BerBeatz replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thanx man im glad u liked it... Haha yea i thought about a tom roll 2 il prob go back n add 1... Thanx a lot 4 the review man

OneVizun 26th Apr 2010 19:31 - 16 years ago

on Days of Our Lives by JoneIsArt

WOW! this is a face twistin beat. WHat is she sayin in the beginnin? you know who would kill this beat? Bone Thugs. I could hear Krayzie with the sick harmonizing on this track. It has a lot of potential. Very well put together. Is it bein used? i think i may be able to bless it with some lyrics. keep it up homie.

Stay blessed

Vizun

OneVizun 26th Apr 2010 19:26 - 16 years ago

on Amadeus Wanna Play Us by JoneIsArt

the intro threw me off for a minute but when the beat dtopped in, I had to get the oven mitts lol. THis track is bonkers. I could see my life in slow motion right now just bumpin this track drivin down the block lol. FIRE!

Stay blessed

Vizun

OneVizun 26th Apr 2010 19:21 - 16 years ago

on Electro Dreams REMAKE by Jalyn

I like this track. Very well put together. I love the strings in here. U gonna sing on it or plan on gettin someone to sing on it. Its more of an R&B joint to me. it does have hip hop potential but i think a singer would do this track justice.

Stay blessed

Vizun

OneVizun 24th Apr 2010 20:27 - 16 years ago

on Look Down by PresdentialProd1

I like this track but im gonna give my honest feedback. im feelin the vocals, its crazt. the drumline fits nicely. I just think there could be more to this track. it has the potential to be epic with just a few more instruments. right now the main focus is on the vocals. with the right instruments added, horns, timpanis, violins, large cymbals, all placed correctly, they will compliment each other. Keep up the good work though.

Stay blessed

Vizun

OneVizun 13th Apr 2010 01:06 - 16 years ago

on So funky by Fumat

I like this track. Im always up for a good synth beat. And what is the screaming saying? Feline?, Feel it? Fila? either way i like it.

Fumat replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thx mate :) The female voice is from here...Looperman and says "Feel it" ;)

OneVizun 13th Apr 2010 00:15 - 16 years ago

on Bi-Lingual Death Punch Part 1 by ChrisGoodwin

ummmm yeah it is highly annoying but can be turned around. First, i like the drumline, reminds me of back when hip hop was worth listening to. second, turn down the "AAYGAAANNNN!" or whatever he is screaming and put it through a radio or telephone filter. Nice track though.

ChrisGoodwin replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

I plan on it man.

OneVizun 20th Mar 2010 21:08 - 16 years ago

on Lost Legends Instrumental by DustHill

wow this track is crazy. I like the feel of it. that piano is dangerous and the strings are sick. keep doin ya thing.

Stay blessed

Vizun

DustHill replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

exactly, two of my favourite VST' instruments the piano and strings work usually very well together thx for the feedback cheerz dusthill

OneVizun 16th Mar 2010 05:07 - 16 years ago

on SICK AN TIRED FT JOEYGAT CITY BOY AN AZ by talents

I love this track. real words bein spoken on here. this track is one of the reasons i come to this site for good music. keep it up man.

Stay Blessed

Vizun

OneVizun 16th Mar 2010 05:00 - 16 years ago

on Midnight Slice Ft Ruff trak and 6 Looperman MCs by StrikingDaggers

nicely done. props to all the mc's on this one.

StrikingDaggers replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thank you so much Vizun.

OneVizun 10th Mar 2010 19:21 - 16 years ago

on Get Up and Go by nepaul

wow man! now i definately have to go lol. beautifully done. Kudos to you two for this work of art.

Stay Blessed.
Vizun

nepaul replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Haha. It was a trip of a lifetime, I'm telling ya. Thanks Vizun.

OneVizun 10th Mar 2010 18:01 - 16 years ago

on World at War by HustlerbyNature

Nicely done. Very deep and heartfelt. Reminds me of my days in Iraq and how i just might be headed back there soon. But thanx for dedicating this one to soldiers.

Stay Blessed
Vizun

HustlerbyNature replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks alot homie. God Bless You!

OneVizun 10th Mar 2010 00:11 - 16 years ago

on Beat Makers Competition 2010 by HustlerbyNature

DOnt tell no one but i voted for you. lol congrats on winning round 2. this is a tight track.

Stay Blessed

Vizun

HustlerbyNature replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks homie much appreciated!

OneVizun 8th Mar 2010 16:56 - 16 years ago

on 10 min track challenge by ShowGunProductions

wow i just watched the video too. This is a hot track to be done in ten minutes. And u know im a synth head lolol! Lovin this track. all the sounds compliment each other very nicely.

Stay blessed

OneVizun 8th Mar 2010 16:48 - 16 years ago

on 10 MINUTE CHALLENGE-PREZIVOR by Prezivor

nice. I like that weird vocl thingy in there. think the piano could use a bit of reverb, but all in all, nicely done.

Stay blessed
Vizun

OneVizun 8th Mar 2010 16:45 - 16 years ago

on 10 minute challenge by Marius9

nicely done for ten minutes. yeah ten minutes was a harder challenge for me than the beatmakers competition. I like the drumline. reminds me of some old school breakdancing.

Marius9 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

And the worst part is I can't take credit for the drum line, lol.

OneVizun 8th Mar 2010 05:21 - 16 years ago

on HeavenlyFather by ajmunson

wow. I love this one. the sample is cool as ever and the beat comes together nicely. yeah i could probably rock to this one. Check out some of my tracks and you could see why...

Stay blessed
Vizun

ajmunson replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks man i would like to do a track together ill throw some beatz your way keep it up.

OneVizun 8th Mar 2010 05:19 - 16 years ago

on Development by ajmunson

i like the vibe of this one. very old school for the new school. Soulful too. simply done yet it will stick to you with the right lyrics.

Stay blessed
Vizun

OneVizun 8th Mar 2010 05:15 - 16 years ago

on rise from the dust by SUBJECTN9NE

came out nicely. yeah dusthill has some wicked loops. this track is cool though. can spit about life or can be a storyteller. keep it up.

Stay blessed.
Vizun

SUBJECTN9NE replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

dusty is the man =D

OneVizun 8th Mar 2010 02:18 - 16 years ago

on As One (beatmakers comp round 3) by Sprawl

i love the reversed piano man lol. this is a beautiful piece of work you did here. good luck in the competition.

Stay blessed

Vizun

Sprawl replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks vizun bro... good luck also, and stay blessed ya self homez

OneVizun 5th Mar 2010 06:14 - 16 years ago

on Road Home by ShowGunProductions

Wow man, i think i may be able to kill this man. I love this track. Has that right vibe. do you also mixdown with vocals cause i can send you the vocals separated when i lay it down.

ShowGunProductions replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Hell yeah man. Send me your vocal tracks and I'll put it all together. That's what's up man! Still got my E-mail?

OneVizun 5th Mar 2010 03:52 - 16 years ago

on Club Creeper by ShowGunProductions

wow, ok i hear timbaland and a little bit of west coast with that synthy type lead in the beginning and through the chorus. can definately vibe to this track. Can i use it?

ShowGunProductions replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Viz you know your welcome to use any of my beats bro! can't wait to hear what you do with it!

OneVizun 5th Mar 2010 03:37 - 16 years ago

on Bounce by DjHarpy217

hmmmm. nice heavy drumline. sounds like something to get a nice little cypher started, you know. Loving the simple pianos in here though and the change ups. Nicely done.

Stay blessed
Vizun

OneVizun 18th Feb 2010 10:12 - 16 years ago

on Elevators (feat Thezerit) by RickMal

wow man im loving this track. you guys blessed this one nicely! much love to you guys for this one.

RickMal replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanx vizun,much appreciated,mal

OneVizun 18th Jan 2010 08:37 - 16 years ago

on Leave Me Alone by StephanieKay

Ive seen how some people take criticism on this site, but i still try to be true when i do. i think there could be a little more harmonizing in the beginning like behind the vocals. not too loud just a little faint. like at the "boy you know its clear to me" part. other than that i love the way this came out. you have extraordinary talent. and BMDR is sick with the productions.

StephanieKay replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

as long it's constructive criticism, i have no complaints. I actually think its great when someone isn't afraid to speak the truth. It helps me become a better musician and helps my music get stronger, so don't feel bad. thanks for being honest :)

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