Mrbillionx

song is a bit long considering that amount of change up and build up going on.

has nice elements going for it but could use a bit of adjustment work on the transitions on the patterns.

I can see where you could work this up into something worth repeated listening in the future.

Thanks for the download

Its an ok song
seems to ramble on and on a bit.

not much emotion in the lyrical delivery.

whatever the effect is used on the vocal seems to come on heavy and kinda takes away from what would be a better tune.

Nice work here on it. Just minor tweaks needed.

thanks

I like this one a lot
I am sure someone that hears it will put something down on it.

Thanks for this

Interesting and indeed different once again.

Becca you always expand the horizons of listening

Yeah with the way things are going

lots of people could rap on this one

Its ok but feels rather boring as far as the movement of the beat goes.

keep it up

( I guess this beat doesn't change up enough for my liking )

Classic stuff

The blooper stuff so owns. seems like you have a talent for it and don't know it.

Killer beat - it grows on you.

nice indeed.

Yeah nice work in here once you pull it all together.

I see the potential in this

just focus a bit and tighten up what needs fixing and keep rolling.

music is ok

but as far as putting letters sent to you as rap

its not working for me - maybe if a real person with feeling could do it or tweak it.

as the vocal work here is dry as someone learning to read for the first time.

nice sounds on this sounds huge big and bangin

yeah I heard that click as well don't know what that is but I am sure you can find it.

Yeah I can feel this.

was lookin for a bit of wobble in it some place.

good work tho

The intro had me fooled into thinkin it was a weak track LOL

oh baby this thing goes hard.

Thanks for the download.

Have no heard anything like this in a while. like years.

So thanks for the memories and great work.

track sounds really smooth
Just not getting why the drums seem to dominate the track and they don't really fit well with whats going on.

I imagine the track sounding much better without them or with some other type drum kit being used.

just my take on it.

keep it going and dress the track out.

sounds ok so far..

awesome

How many more can you bang out like this?

You got skillz

Yeah if it wasn't for the overuse of the "clickin" in this track I would really say you had something.

Even with a little less clicking you still need a bit more to sell this track.

nice try

Would love to see what someone can do with this as it has a nice feel to it.

Looks like a hit to me that more people need to hear.

You may just change the world yet..

Thanks for this

yeah
I think this can hold its own without the vocals.

I think it might work better with other vocal work as well.

nice work on this one seriously

awesome track

Nice concept

I tip my hat to you and mega thumbs up

quite a busy sounding track..

IF you ever decide how you really want to lay the track down
maybe it will have more replay value.

The way it sits now its ready for one play then the trash.

The music is real hot on this one.

freakin hilarious
I demand more valley talk LOL

that has just made my day... I want a copy

"gag me with a spoon" - in valley talk

sounds almost ok

don't know how many systems you used to test this on

I am sure you will have to make a few adjustments before long.

I almost got into this track

with all the vocal overlay on this it really takes away of what
could really be a better track to have real replay value.

volume on track is clipping.

which seems to be the same problem with the vocal work
levels and flow as always.

music seems ok - but can be pumped up a bit more