feel the passion and the conflicted emotion. Did a good job. It reminds of my "making sure its making Sense". The only critism is the choice to double the hook so many time. You have a good voice and the multiple layers sound distracting.
This is very special. It has that sticking quality to it. Check my song lighter than air done for my brother. We from trinidad. The sentiments are pouring out everywhere. Wrote a song call give them hope looking for track for it. here are some of the lyrics. "You call this living I been there
being weak losing sleep smoking burning
Holes in bed sheets dancing with defeat
Shoes worn out hurting my feet just to keep
The little I got left embracing the pain like next
What should I expect to happen never expecting
The best knowing I’m blessed.....
on SUCKER PUNCH 2 by wormusic
"moody like a girl with a booty". The track is eardrum crack. Who hooking you up.
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thank you thank you for taking time to check out our passion---peace travis (richard cook)
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Holes in bed sheets dancing with defeat
Shoes worn out hurting my feet just to keep
The little I got left embracing the pain like next
What should I expect to happen never expecting
The best knowing I’m blessed.....
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