KnightHeir

Haha i love the flow man. Also, the instrumentation is well done. Cool track overall. I would say the flow is definitely hip hop, but the beat isnt traditional hip hop... Thats a good question.

Only your second track ?! That's pretty good.

Another dope track man. Your wordplay and storytelling ability is my favorite thing about your style.

.if you part of an act
.pardon the raps that ex-pose
.patterns is scraps
.talking pigs feet and neck bones...

just a few bars man, you got something with potential here.

FIRE! Love this. Well structured flow for both mc's and the beat is well done. The positive message is just a plus. Keep on perfecting the craft, peace.

This just a quick beat you made? I still like it and think it has potential and a catchy vibe. Have a good day.

Nice meaningful lyrics and beat supports the message. The mix sounds professional as well. Great job!

.hitting the books oh my God
.-truth stay coming to the light
.enemy shook on my mom
.night time running with the light...

Nice work Goty, big sound.

.hip-hop - my main Dame not a side chick
.sicker than the Heimlich - maneuver yeah I rhyme slick
.every time I rhyme kick you wonder where the time went.
.5'6" but mic spits leave ya mind bent

(A few lyrics to this beat)

.aye yo I been on my grind a long time im focused
.hard times for soldiers is only for minds to focus
.practice makes perfect, no pain, no glory
.-ups downs, pleasure and pain, my whole story...

Aye nice job with this beat. Motivating and uptempo like it a lot.

Man, nice work. Let me get the file and i'll see what I can do with it.

Really nice to listen to. Love how this is layered and nostalgic. Great job.

Dope man, got a song I wanna do to this.

Crazy beat, nice job. May do something with it.

Crazy beat, nice work.

.his love for me was sacrifice of son for my obedience
.expedient - help - much needed was immediate
.I'm seeing it - now
.back then I felt defeated when
.my plans steered - damn near - fell
.he ain't leave me there...

This is crazy bro, really nice job. You created an emotional feel that I rarely see now days.

You welcome. May check back for complete version later and do something with it.

This is dope.

Good track. Nice work on the concept, mixing and mastering. The singer on the hook goes in too.

(lyrics to this beat)

.resurrected like Christ bro
.blessed with a nice flo
.ice cold raps, gone snap
.for a price tho
.cash out
.then I mash out
.hemi nitro...

Nice beat. Really well done, nice work.

.I'm in the valley of decision
.and I challenge the division
.religion my prescription
.hit the road up on a mission
.-me myself and I, the One And Only that knows me and
.the love of my life, yeah my wife, that holds me...

Storytelling beat. Like the feel of it, matches the mood of my life right now. Good work MSB.

(something I wrote to this beat)

.tribe of Judah ruler smoking buddah out the hookah
.schemes for the future thats lucrative gimme gouda
.semi spray shoota with the beam cant get me
.ahki if you down with the plan than pray with me

Smooth and well balanced tune, nice work.

(something I wrote to this beat)

.everything comes to light eventually
.though the centuries pass
.the penalties last that's rudimentary
.stuck in third density
.with enemies and entities...

Real smooth and hypnotic. Love the loop and the accompaniment of instruments, good job. Hope to hear the finished product.

Interesting sounds and nice feel, good job.

Wasn't that bad man. You gotta come with more energy and structure your bars better. Use more words that rhyme, but only use it if it makes sense.