It's really good, deep, spacy and with great instruments and melodies. I've always loved mixing this kind of instruments that wouldn't normally go together and you did it perfectly.
Makes me feel like I'm in the desert watching some weird slow mo dance ritual with fire.
I also like how the melody goes changing with some new instruments every so and then without every truly committing to it, makes it hard to predict and fun to listen.
Really love this song, not many like it, hope you explore this vibe again :)
Thanks for coming and checking out this track, which is quite a special one of mine.
Even so, there are still some things about it that annoy me. I may need to turn the bass down a bit at times, or perhaps EQ to make it less muddy as it is a mixture of different takes and playing techniques (bass guitar, synth bass etc).
" I've always loved mixing this kind of instruments that wouldn't normally go together"
That's the sort of thing I also love doing. I'm always trying to show people that any sound can go well with others. That is true but you have to actually do it and really make it work.
"Makes me feel like I'm in the desert watching some weird slow mo dance ritual with fire."
That seems quite accurate and it does somehow conjure up a desert feel. Probably because of that resonator guitar sound plus the Eastern melodies. And then you have the dark, psychedelic strings that add some sort of supernatural mood.
"the melody goes changing with some new instruments every so and then without every truly committing to it"
Yes, I keep changing stuff throughout my tracks. I try to keep things interesting and a little bit unpredictable all the time.
"hope you explore this vibe again"
I'd really like to. I guess I'll just have to try starting some slow or mid tempo far out hip hop vibe and try making it all dark and psychedelic.
Thanks man! Brain and Ray and me are doing more. We are doing most of the stuff in the private band function at wikiloops dot com. Check it out if you like. We already did some other songs, check out my tracks on looperman and you can find a few we did with Hemanifezt. Thanks for listening!
Awesome idea man. Do you play your own guitar? If so, U can re-arrange the main riff slightly to best acomodate the beat changes through out the song. At least I think it would become more interesting.
I think youy should also use some reverb, try to fill the space more, maybe record anohter guitar with diferent tone, same riff, try to make it sound fuller. The drums could also be more hitting, for industrial at least.
And then I would lower the sound clips volume, make it all sound tighter, right now the soundclips sound to loud, to out of place.
But also, I'm not using the best stereo system right now, so I could be mispeaking, I'll hear it again in the future.
Hum, with just the finished mp3, will be hard, you will always lose quality.
But I just listened again with better speakers and actually think it's quite okay. Where I listened before, the voice came up too on top and I couldn't hear the bass and kick well.
Anyway, EQ and compressor is the best way to master simply, just listen to hiphop you like and try to get it the same. It's all trying and experience
I want to collab with you in the furute if you're up for it. I really like your rap style and recording is quite good.
Thanks for the advice. Yeah the engineer that did it had a really good ear. He processed the vocals but I don't think he touched the beats. Working with another sound engineer who does detailed full track work. Yeah, we can definitely work man, thanks for the compliment. Just let me know.
"specially the bass strings, sounds like a fretless bass"
That's all cello. There's bass guitar as well in some sections but those big slides are all cello parts.
I add a slow attack effect to the cello when recording which helps give it a "liquid" effect. And it does also make it sound like a fretless bass, as you say.
"Love progressive chill out."
Me too. I try to make all my music progressive as I'm not that interested in making regular, traditional genres of music.
Real good, but, maybe just my taste, but i think you should let the bass bread some more, have some more space between notes, more flow, more gangsta, it doesn't need to play all the notes.
The rest I think is awesome, great rapping too. Congrats
Hey thanks for listening and commenting! I still use computers of course, and I do like some virtual stuff, but it is far to easy to think that a piece of software will turn us into rich famous musicians. I've pretty much always been making noise with real objects, and the more I do it, the more fulfilled I feel as an artist. I appreciate you stopping by!
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Makes me feel like I'm in the desert watching some weird slow mo dance ritual with fire.
I also like how the melody goes changing with some new instruments every so and then without every truly committing to it, makes it hard to predict and fun to listen.
Really love this song, not many like it, hope you explore this vibe again :)
Thanks for coming and checking out this track, which is quite a special one of mine.
Even so, there are still some things about it that annoy me. I may need to turn the bass down a bit at times, or perhaps EQ to make it less muddy as it is a mixture of different takes and playing techniques (bass guitar, synth bass etc).
" I've always loved mixing this kind of instruments that wouldn't normally go together"
That's the sort of thing I also love doing. I'm always trying to show people that any sound can go well with others. That is true but you have to actually do it and really make it work.
"Makes me feel like I'm in the desert watching some weird slow mo dance ritual with fire."
That seems quite accurate and it does somehow conjure up a desert feel. Probably because of that resonator guitar sound plus the Eastern melodies. And then you have the dark, psychedelic strings that add some sort of supernatural mood.
"the melody goes changing with some new instruments every so and then without every truly committing to it"
Yes, I keep changing stuff throughout my tracks. I try to keep things interesting and a little bit unpredictable all the time.
"hope you explore this vibe again"
I'd really like to. I guess I'll just have to try starting some slow or mid tempo far out hip hop vibe and try making it all dark and psychedelic.
Thanks again.
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I think youy should also use some reverb, try to fill the space more, maybe record anohter guitar with diferent tone, same riff, try to make it sound fuller. The drums could also be more hitting, for industrial at least.
And then I would lower the sound clips volume, make it all sound tighter, right now the soundclips sound to loud, to out of place.
But also, I'm not using the best stereo system right now, so I could be mispeaking, I'll hear it again in the future.
on Myy Lyyfe by KnightHeir
But I just listened again with better speakers and actually think it's quite okay. Where I listened before, the voice came up too on top and I couldn't hear the bass and kick well.
Anyway, EQ and compressor is the best way to master simply, just listen to hiphop you like and try to get it the same. It's all trying and experience
I want to collab with you in the furute if you're up for it. I really like your rap style and recording is quite good.
on The Warm Glow Of Yesterday by StaticNomad
Love progressive chill out. Keep it up.
"specially the bass strings, sounds like a fretless bass"
That's all cello. There's bass guitar as well in some sections but those big slides are all cello parts.
I add a slow attack effect to the cello when recording which helps give it a "liquid" effect. And it does also make it sound like a fretless bass, as you say.
"Love progressive chill out."
Me too. I try to make all my music progressive as I'm not that interested in making regular, traditional genres of music.
Thanks again.
on Myy Lyyfe by KnightHeir
Just master it better, specially the instrumental. It's awesome really, nice flow.
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The rest I think is awesome, great rapping too. Congrats
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Nice, but some sounds seem to peak a lot.
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If you ever want to rap for my tracks, feel free to check them.
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