Came here from your forum post. It's not bad, there's some pretty cool synth work in here and I think you did a good job of meshing the samples, though that part at 1:27 felt a bit random or unnecessary to me. Could be cleaned up a little too but don't get me wrong, I did enjoy this.
Thanks for listening SS, I threw in that little jazzy riff to make the transition into the slower part less abrupt and I think it keeps the overall piece quirky and unpredictable. I'm not quite sure what you mean by "cleaned up" since I really don't know what I'm doing so, maybe you could enlighten me? I do really appreciate your input because we all have to start somewhere and learn as we go.
Wow this caught me off guard, this is some super high quality mixing. I mean the track as a whole is pretty much flawless but yeah it's just so damn clean.
Found the vocals in the intro and outro a bit cheesy, just not really my thing I guess. But beside that I really enjoyed the chill synthwave vibes. The spoken word travelling from one ear to another was a nice touch.
That vocal mean to be the voice of our childish part, living inside everyone of us, that part that doesn't know what suffering is. The left to right spoken words mean the trouble or the negative thoughts everybody passing through in the path pf life. Open and closing lookinh for love is a wheel that spins, called life.
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