Thanks so much! I was really unsure of what the feedback would be, and I'm suprised. Thanks alot, I uploaded my version of the Christmas Song as well. Check it out, and thanx again. BTW luv da default pic. Who wouldnt luv to say they got a review from Barney lol.
Thank you for the review! And Im not sure if you got the message I sent you a while ago, but I used your "In the sky" one over a break beat just because I loved it so much! And I sent you a message about it but Im not sure if you got it.
So to here your work on top of mine check out my track "BEATQUAKE" you may enjoy hearing it. And A big thank you goes to you from me for making such good stuff for people to use... so THANK YOU!
Firstly I would like to say sorry for your loss
It is very hard to deal with
If he heard this now, i know he would like this a lot
I can tell that you are able to take things such as a
death in the family and turning it around as an inspiration
to create such good music
This song touched me, and I enjoy your ability to make good solid
tracks
-bri
This would sound even better if the tempo was a bit slower
maybe at around 130 bpm then i would really feel the slower essence
of crunk, although that was just a suggestion, I enjoy this alot
I can tell that you attempted very much so with the composition of this song.
The message is a bit distorted through the many things that are happening every second
A suggestion would be to have a steady flow with the music and make the transitions a bit more fluent.
And also, when using loops, make sure that they don't sound to choppy, or end abruptly, they end up ruining the essence of transitions.
Lastly, I feel that you were trying to find many loops to go with what you are trying to convey to the listeners, In my opinion you should do the opposite. I would recommend Creating a solid instrumental track, then shape your lyric timing over them. That way it wont be so difficult for you to try and savage loops to fit the tempo/style of your voice.
On a lighter note, I can honestly see the amount of time and effort that you put into this track, but like anything, there is always room for improvement.
If you need any help with how to do the things listed, just email me at:
brianacod4@gmail.com
-Bri
hey! thanks so much for the advice, i don't know the first thing about making music so i definitely want some help. Thanks again!!!
lots of love,
Orihime
Hi
Thankyou for your review.
I think you may be pleasantly surprised if you have a go with Ableton. This track was made up in what is called the session view of ableton just throw loops in and have a jam and see what happens
and this was the result.
You should give it a go.
Regards
Krook
on SO DECODED by AMAZZIN1
You know what i was thinking?
possibly an ambient sounding pad playing in the background/ a whirlwind type of sound
haha i know my mind wonders, but i like your music
you have a fan right here
keep doing your thang'
:-p
-bri
on Punk Rawk Chick by PaulFranke
but a bit softer
:-p
One suggestion is on the chorus guitar, it was a bit off (only by like a couple of seconds)
I like this a lot
definitely my style
on CP DUB #6 (Give Me Strength) by DJCP1
very upbeat
:-p
on Sagittarius in Stereo by MrTwilight
Very cinematic, so many things come to mind when i listen to this
very well done
on Emergency by TRIS
excellent track
on O Holy Night by santiagosky
:-p
Excellent job
on Never Give Up by Orihime
:-p
on Run Devin Run by Edge7
excellent job
on DANGEROUS by brandonjames
Excellent quality
no flaws in my book
:-p
I love the FX as well
So to here your work on top of mine check out my track "BEATQUAKE" you may enjoy hearing it. And A big thank you goes to you from me for making such good stuff for people to use... so THANK YOU!
on little girl by graciellita
Excellent job
on East side of LA by MosReQuest
"are you listening to dre?"
you know what I said?
YES
You are an excellent producer
your amazing
:-p
-bri
on Beat 23 by xSHAHx
just lower the reverb and you will be fine
XD
on R.I.P. JO JO by AMAZZIN1
It is very hard to deal with
If he heard this now, i know he would like this a lot
I can tell that you are able to take things such as a
death in the family and turning it around as an inspiration
to create such good music
This song touched me, and I enjoy your ability to make good solid
tracks
-bri
on MY RENDITION by AMAZZIN1
maybe at around 130 bpm then i would really feel the slower essence
of crunk, although that was just a suggestion, I enjoy this alot
on Drop It by beanut
excellent job
on Mary by Littbarski
and so is this track
on solve the problem 1 by matthewhall
I like this a lot
it would be awesome if there was a fade in bass line
that introduced the dnb
other than that excellent job
on Thrillseeker feat. Calendar Girl - Sleepless by Thrillseeker
this is an amazing song
on Crunk 4 Christ 4 Real by KTSDA1NE
I went freaking bonkers with this song
head bobbing and all
your responsible for my headache
0-o
jk
good job
on Out Of The Dark - (The Arches Mix) 2010 Remaster by Salkizar
:-p
on Atheist by Orihime
The message is a bit distorted through the many things that are happening every second
A suggestion would be to have a steady flow with the music and make the transitions a bit more fluent.
And also, when using loops, make sure that they don't sound to choppy, or end abruptly, they end up ruining the essence of transitions.
Lastly, I feel that you were trying to find many loops to go with what you are trying to convey to the listeners, In my opinion you should do the opposite. I would recommend Creating a solid instrumental track, then shape your lyric timing over them. That way it wont be so difficult for you to try and savage loops to fit the tempo/style of your voice.
On a lighter note, I can honestly see the amount of time and effort that you put into this track, but like anything, there is always room for improvement.
If you need any help with how to do the things listed, just email me at:
brianacod4@gmail.com
-Bri
lots of love,
Orihime
on IsThisMusik by Krook
I haven't used Abelton Live
but i know that it inst a piece of cake!
With knowing that, I can tell the amount of work that you
put towards this track.
:-)
Thankyou for your review.
I think you may be pleasantly surprised if you have a go with Ableton. This track was made up in what is called the session view of ableton just throw loops in and have a jam and see what happens
and this was the result.
You should give it a go.
Regards
Krook
on Je Dort by DJVO
but i like this alot
you gotta love the eurogate lol
Xp
on Die In The Name Of Satan by Corpse89
this sounds like a loopermanish Shagrath lol
Xp
on On My Own by Salkizar
i love this
xp