this has crazy potential to be an amazing track man
thats sincere
youre lacking in some areas tho, i have to be honest. dont take it the wrong way.
vocals and mastering are key in songs especially in one like your making here
whether or not the sound is commercial quality, the song is very nice man i get what youre saying
id say work on delivery, vocal quality / mastering in general as well as maybe work on effects ( just ties in with mastering)
hope this can help
keep it up
-CAP
Ty, all of that is valid and helpful criticism and is stuff I have been trying to work on and understand completely, I have a few more tracks I have made that I'll be uploading in the next few days due to the 24 hour limit which I think show me working on these areas, ty for the help and support :)
couldnt even give us 30 seconds? cmon man what makes me want to leave the website and have to find your youtube channel just for this beat when you give out like 2 bars of a beat lol
just sayin
lol sry i will give more seconds but i did say it was snippet its just i want to promote my youtube channel im sry if u want the full beat i can send it to you
very entrapping song
your vocals are absolutely perfect for this vibe
the beat is savage, great vibes overall
as far as what youre saying you delivered it perfectly
i really like one - off songs like this man keep em comin
-CAP
Thanks tsochai, i really appreciate your time and response to this track, the message is a little deeper then i think people will understand, but never the less, im glad you hit the play button.
has some classic feel to it. i actually was writing up a bunch of recommendations on what you should do to complete the track, but I was typing before it finished!
so as im typing you're answering all the things i was reccomending
seriously great job , very interesting track
i really fuck with it man good work
hope to hear more from you
cheers -CAP
Hi CAP, thats awesome to hear thanks. Its my first effort at this style of music, so really appreciate any feed back. I listen to classic hip hop, trip hop, chillout all the time but have never tried making it. Cheers mate.
awesome man.
this is fire
gotta be real, your topics arent too relatable with me but on a pure musical level youve improved greatly off your track i saw you put out before this
keep it up homie!!!!
-CAP
3 minutes in i was trying to realize your thoughts behind this beautiful track....
such an amazing guitar.
4 and a half minutes in and im amazed at this beautiful piano you used.
delay gets to me, im a freak for the delay.
you have some sick piano skills. thats an understatement
love the delayed slides
i like to listen to tracks in full and i give my points on them.
however this song just really got to me. amazing i hope to hear more from you
so good
CAP
i've just heard this song - and this first instance I was stunned.
This sample / loop is so amazing, a person made a beat for me a LONG time ago, used the same loop but way different tempos.
Really crazy to see how you approached it, to be honest I did not know it was a sample.
Either way, the track you made is very unique and awesome.
Great work !
I'm two years late but...
cheers :)
-CAP
awesome track.
well put together, love that beautiful transition / introduction of the full sounds around 1:16
very nice track, great work Argon.
Hope you start posting more, would definitely love to hear it.
Awesome work.
Keep it up
cheers
-CAP
Thank you so much for these wonderful words and your feedback! I will start posting more soon after I have sorted out some stuff irl.
Stay true, keep making music!
much respect to you, however i do gotta ask, are you switching languages in the verse?
some reason i have an issue understanding majority of what you said.
that being said, i would also say work on your delivery, you seem just a bit off every now and then in this song, also maybe work on your posture; as in your distance from the mic, be cautious of that, i have a lot of trouble staying in the same spot.
mixing would definitely need work, and thats coming from me - i can't mix for shit.
but yea i mean everything else you got it on lock man, its a nice track. just trying to help you out
definitely would like to hear more!
cheers to you armandas,
-CAP
some classic dubstep man
love it
used to be all about this stuff and this sounds just like a professional track - by that i just mean a song i would be jammin to back then.
not really into electro music anymore as much
love the track though, keep up great work.//
did an amazing job
-CAP
on Wasted my youth by Belody
thats sincere
youre lacking in some areas tho, i have to be honest. dont take it the wrong way.
vocals and mastering are key in songs especially in one like your making here
whether or not the sound is commercial quality, the song is very nice man i get what youre saying
id say work on delivery, vocal quality / mastering in general as well as maybe work on effects ( just ties in with mastering)
hope this can help
keep it up
-CAP
on Rock Ft K19 by DrBreak
great work regardless. i can post as a remix or somethin
lmk thanks man
-CAP
on SMOKEPURP X LIL PUMP TYPE BEAT SNIPPET-PROD SUMI by KingSumith123
just sayin
on A letter to God NF by priest39
your vocals are absolutely perfect for this vibe
the beat is savage, great vibes overall
as far as what youre saying you delivered it perfectly
i really like one - off songs like this man keep em comin
-CAP
on Bloomonkey Trip Hop by bloomonkey
so as im typing you're answering all the things i was reccomending
seriously great job , very interesting track
i really fuck with it man good work
hope to hear more from you
cheers -CAP
on Im desperate by DanElsmor
i liked it honestly very nice
great work
on mumble rap beat by Paleczka123
on Functional by Armandas1337
this is fire
gotta be real, your topics arent too relatable with me but on a pure musical level youve improved greatly off your track i saw you put out before this
keep it up homie!!!!
-CAP
on Echoes From Private Spaces by Orlando51
such an amazing guitar.
4 and a half minutes in and im amazed at this beautiful piano you used.
delay gets to me, im a freak for the delay.
you have some sick piano skills. thats an understatement
love the delayed slides
i like to listen to tracks in full and i give my points on them.
however this song just really got to me. amazing i hope to hear more from you
so good
CAP
With much appreciation_____Orlando
on Draga Inima Adda - Mef Beats by MefBeats
This sample / loop is so amazing, a person made a beat for me a LONG time ago, used the same loop but way different tempos.
Really crazy to see how you approached it, to be honest I did not know it was a sample.
Either way, the track you made is very unique and awesome.
Great work !
I'm two years late but...
cheers :)
-CAP
on Call Me Snippet by donfons
great job imma definitely try and find your project.
cheers man good work
-CAP
on Karaoke Machine by braindedmusic
foreal
cheers
-CAP
on Reference by yashito0022
said try rappin to this i would KILL it
LOL
-CAP
on Mars 5 by Heralbjon
very uplifting
i heard a story... not sure if you intended. but.
cheers
-CAP
on Synthpop Eats Itself by pnmit
great listen.
cheers mit
-CAP
on Lofi shoes with the laces inside out by pnmit
cheers to you and your amazing work
grateful to have found this, and you.
-CAP
on PARTYNEXTDOOR Type Beat - Low Key by Jairtheshadow
nice track overall
i like it
on Battle of immeasurable scale by Jajanken
thank you for that. great listen all the way thru
cheers to you, keep it up
CAP
on A very long day by durtygoo
and sick song, aggressive. gets your point across
BANG SHIT FUCK SHIT lol
cheers
CAP
on Kalvin by Mafisto
well put together, love that beautiful transition / introduction of the full sounds around 1:16
very nice track, great work Argon.
Hope you start posting more, would definitely love to hear it.
Awesome work.
Keep it up
cheers
-CAP
Stay true, keep making music!
on Risen by Armandas1337
some reason i have an issue understanding majority of what you said.
that being said, i would also say work on your delivery, you seem just a bit off every now and then in this song, also maybe work on your posture; as in your distance from the mic, be cautious of that, i have a lot of trouble staying in the same spot.
mixing would definitely need work, and thats coming from me - i can't mix for shit.
but yea i mean everything else you got it on lock man, its a nice track. just trying to help you out
definitely would like to hear more!
cheers to you armandas,
-CAP
on ready to fly by danke6706
nice track , great drum play even better guitar maneuvering
cheers
-CAP
that was made in 2012...:-)
Danke
on Omega - WooF by Simonderkes
love it
used to be all about this stuff and this sounds just like a professional track - by that i just mean a song i would be jammin to back then.
not really into electro music anymore as much
love the track though, keep up great work.//
did an amazing job
-CAP
on Shadow Don - Inside by shadow412
some type of ski mask ish flow.
which is good i realy like this
fire track
on FREE C Melodic Minor Trap beat Prod by Adel by adeltl30
fire track
-CAP