hamood

well,obviously walks on dissonant intervals , and think it sounds cinematic for me(or if not maybe a weired soundtrack),anyway I'm not sure about pop specially according to variational selected sequences notes and suspended mood in which won't go to a modulation bridge and won't come to any solved chords too .
admirable my young colleague , as my country tallents are worthy of adoration withouth primitive forbidness of the same thing you may know.
kutah baraye shoma,dar morede mabhase matruhe dar morede tallafoze Iran dar message arz khaham kard .Best wishes.__Behnam.

Hey Guy ! as a better phraseology ,can call it''kharab shode''
well,I've found it in randomized search about ''Iran'',
glad to see a young tallented countryman here,va nemidunam fingilish benevisam ya farsi according to ghavade herfei ijab nemikone ke ba ham zabun ham be zabune gheir az site harf bezanim,amma any way I marked it as a favorite,cause there was a some loudable creativeness in it for a young musician & also there was a bitter reality in its name''Irane viran''
faghat kash ham mihane khubam esme keshvaremun ro hamuntori dorost be kar bebarid,jesarat mikonam albatte ke migam,monteha specially cause site international hast esme keshvaremun ro ba bolandtarin ehteram ha biarim behtar nist?
arezuhaye khub baraye shoma, baraye mihanam,baraye azadi,va baraye este'dad haye keshvaremun.sincerely=eradat.__Behnam.

Wow! Such great suspense. I see darkness. Yes, confusion. Loss. Despair.

Great piece! Curious to know why "Pop" though :-)

salam,baraye che bakhshi darkhaste hamkar(collab) dadi?
vocal, text?
man chand nafari ro dar in zamineh mishnasam.