toeslap

I like it. I think you put the beat in a different key than the original vocal but that still works.
I was curious about the vocals? The "I hope you don't mind" sound very different but the verse actually sounds like Elton John with a load of effects?

Super catchy!

hi bro i know nothing about rock im hip-hop but i fancy myself as a rockstar. i wrote what i believe is a cracking rock vocal and i have been snubbed for no apparent reason on the collab request that an artist offered, although said artist commented back to everyone including yourself i never even got a reply and mine was the only offer to sing, i have no issue the artist saying no, that's their choice, but to be snubbed, fuck that. im an established artist here im well followed and give back to the community more than anyone. nobody insults me for no apparent reason
i heard your track yesterday and believe i could tweak my lyric to this. which in turn means i like this track :)) i know its free to download which i have, i've extended it to 2.27 shorter than what i wanted but enough and as i'm polite and like to ask the artist first if he minds me singing on his work. hence the comment and explanation, im being fully transparent with you.
this could be the stumbling block though, well for you, i don't give a shit im a tough boy im giving it the same title as his track so it could be controversial and i will also give you the same options. feel free to say no i wont be offended if you would rather your track not be used. but this song is coming irrelevant of your decision i'll find something else or write my own but my rockstar vocal WILL be heard, go on bro, i dare ya, i'll give you full credit in the description it will get bags of listens you won't be disappointed, check my back work out i write good songs most here will tell you that too. and my singing and delivery have improved this is no toeslap this is a face slap are you tough enough :))
p.s the chorus lyric is already up on the request post if you can work out who? i'll tweak it in my favour now and i will make it crystal clear who in my description if you let me go ahead

brilliant ... simply brilliant ... I always like when the drums are embedded in the music ...it doesn't sounds too much ... it is allowed to push the groovy but not above everything else...
great tracky ...
fistbump,
Danke

nice little track bro i can here fire here but like Bou i think its over processed, certainly the vocal, but that doesn't make it wrong just not my taste, maybe revisit it and extended it to 3 mins because the music is dope

That's really nice! it has quite a few of the things I like to rail against as a grumpy old man, like overprocessed vocals and electronic drums with clicky hats, but you know what? both work really well here, and I really enjoyed it. Good job.

Firee

this is great. Makes me want to dance.

I love it!!

very neat vocal sound and nice build. is it really dub? it could be hip hop, no? anyway, if that is the final it is very cool in its brevity. but really you could keep going with this one. nice work. all the best. Dan

Nice sidechain chords

NICE JOB! Nice! Awesome!

Omg bro! Can i remix this?

https://soundcloud.com/cyanide-music

i dig it! nice work. Thanks for using it