Dripig

ya v ahue

nihuya se on tebe stenu teksta nakatal
nu koroche
po-moemu vibivaetsya iz obshey kartini tolko vocal
nu i bass nemnogo ne v ton

a tak zaebis

I am by NO means a professional, but I've learned a few things over the last 27 years, and I don't mind passing some of that along. I sent you a message directly through Looperman, so check your emails for that.

It's an alright track. I don't know if I would call it a "masterpiece" though. Increased volume isn't what you needed. What you needed is a more clear mix. As it sits now, the wavetable is a brick, but it's still muddy and hard to hear anything distinctly. Everything sits on top of each other and fights for space.
Increasing the bass just caused the other frequencies to duck. Not in the clear sidechain pump sort of way, but because it's dominating and won't let anything breathe properly.
I don't know if you're using loops, or if you have control over every element to this track. (Kick, snare, synths, pads, etc.), but either way, they should all be routed to their own mixer track, EQ'd, balanced in levels. stereo separated, and compressed (the right way).
If you don't know how to do any of that, and would like some guidance, I can help, and if others know you want to learn, I'm sure they would chime in too.
Knocking tracks out in 3 hours doesn't mean you're a pro. Quality wins over quantity every time. Fortunately for you, being a member of this site could benefit you greatly, if you choose that route.
Let me know if you're interested. If you're not, that's fine too.
Take care.
V.

V Cool and v cinematic

It's nice to hear normal phonk instead of Brazilian

krasava

It is very well built and arranged. It has a beautiful theme, very interesting and vivid. I liked your work here
Best regards, Anthony

Good to hear some quality phonk here.
I like it!
Cheers!

Most people have forgotten about this genre - or have gotten far away from what it is supposed to be. Drift is more my taste, but u have done well here. The drops and cowbells are good too. Well done.

Hello Dripig, listened to your track and think its pretty good work....keep at it my friend.

i think the bass is off on a couple notes.. might just be me i have weird ears. the rest sounds good tho

Love the distortion of that snare. Good one.

Sounds so professional - you did a really good job - we don't get much phonk here and when we do, it kinds sounds the same but this is really pleasant and different

Hello Dripig, enjoyed this nice laidback lo-fi track, its a pretty serene and pleasant piece of music, good work.

I love these deep, muffled drums. Good job!

Really lovely track. I like that filter on drums.
Nice for chillin and relaxing mind.
Good job!
Cheers!

Lovely, pretty little tune - I would play this when I needed to be calm and focussed

thats a good track Dripig, the drums a little more subdued than outright d&b but i like it better, i like the liquid side of the genre and you brought a good piece, you descibe it as an old piece, it must have meant something to you because you kept it, i bet your glad you did, nice work bruv

Nice synth work, excellent dreamy atmosphere with a very vivid rhythmic part as the genre demands. I really liked your song.
Best wishes, Anthony

great track!

I love the intro to this, get's even better when the drums kick in. I really like the dreamy synth mixed with the DnB beat, which isn't too overpowering. Cool ending too. Great track.

Good liquid. I even prefer more this kind of D'n'B, melodic one, than broken from 2000's.

Kak to tak koroche. Molodec bro :)

This is really nice track. I like what you done here.
Great job!
Cheers!

Hello Dripig, very nice work....enjoyed this twice, great job

Beautiful -l a really good Drum n Base track - I can imagine this being played at Cafe Del Mar