DarrenHirst

nice work bro proper yorkshire track, pattie and chips with a bag of scraps few rounds buttered bread squashed into the scraps with ketchup and salt an vinegar, yorkshire puds every Sunday not just with beef use to get a tray of gravy and chips from WK Chow and bro Boro is famous for our traditional dish a Parmo, real good work bro original from our part of the country

Awesome Track. I like it.

Great fun Pop vibes - slightly Indie - reminded me a bit of Pulp's style on songs on a different class, I don't really know why - great, fun tune

Nice one Bro. Keep it up. Great work.

Hello DarrenHirst, enjoyed your track, vocals are great and music very well done.....

Lovely! Who's the singer? Sounds nice and poppy!

nice pop track Darren, good vocals and the rhythm and beat are great, just about to retire, nice work

Man you are darned clever - those lyrics - I take my hat off to you, Darren
Fallen out again over something stupid
Someone doesn't like me - his name is Cupid SUPERB

Very cool pop track. BTW I am a big fan of your loops on this website.

Even her shadow tried to hide Lol lol lol genius lyrics and great tune

amazing, good job

Hello DarrenHirst, enjoyed quite a bit my friend.....nice lyrics and pretty cool backing music.

Awesome and catchy!

Great job bro. Awesome lyrics :)
Cheers!

Dang - you got that twang on this thang! Giving me Billy Ray Cyrus vibes - perfect lyrics - Pick Up Truck driver perfect career for lone cowboy - great tune

My throat is dry
I need a drink
Going to the bar
Is better than water don't you think? Love it! Pour me a Whisky dry and we gonna woop it up at that Damn Rodeo - yee hah! Glenn Campbell metaphorically snogs Shania Twain ;) We could never hate you Darren..This is a great song

I'm not American but it sounds like it :)
Now my throat is dry too, i need a drink ;)
I love it bro! Good one!
Cheers!

Hello DarrenHirst, this is really great....agree with DanM the story is beautiful and vocals excellent....nice music accompaniment

You are really good song writer. Nice lyrics.

You got into the heads of those teenagers v well - you are a very good lyric writer, Darren - I like what you did here

All elements are placed clearly in the mix and complement each other well. Good one.

why does it sound like ai generated this but i also i like it.

Mr Hirst, adding writing to your skillset eh, bro this is what its all about, the tools are at your disposal, its a catchy track very similar to the one I put up for a day until i realised that's not dime, but as you dont sing this is your fall back, the lyrics are good, to here your words sang must have given you a lift, well wrote bro, not just a beat maker, I'd have been proud of them
you can write your own music and just uploaded lyrics and add them yourself or put all your files music and lyrics up and see what comes back, now you have wrote one, you'll want to write again, and from a songwriter Darren always take your inspiration from yours or others life's they hit harder, well done mate

Lyrics are awesome bro.
You have real talent there.
I love it!

Love them - got that socialite yet urban edge to them - keep at it, it will become a regular thing with the writing. Accidental Rock Song was inspired by Oli getting a parking ticket - I got that one line and then Bam - it was all written ;) I am sure you will do same sort of thing x