WithoutMyArmor

I'd love to use this song for a trailer for a book I've written.
Is there any chance you have a version with female vocals?

I love this song.

"Now you're a stain in my past."

That is a great lyric!

I won't say it's dark, or haunting. For me, it's emotional and very touching. As a fact, I always wanted to make lyrics and music like this; deep, emotional, filled with meaning with the help of acoustics. I want more of these lol

Can you tell me some tips on making tunes like these? And also the lyrics? (Well, I know it should be based on experiences)

Cheers!

it touches me so deep .
I really loved it .

Amazing song! vocals are great. the melody is superb. got a fav. just 1 comment and I am not a pro by any means. the recording seems to sound a little distant. mabe a EQ adjustment or maybe just me. any who, great song.

Hey there. So I went to download the stems. The only stems that actually worked were your main vocals, for some reason all the instruments and drums did not. No worries though. I made my own hauntingly melancholy mix of this work as an alternative idea.
Nice song BTW and great vocals.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/183814
Cru

Nice arrangement! I´ll maybe try to mix this one with distorted Guitars :-;

Nice track! I really liked the vocals so I'll probably give this a sick remix.

brilliant vocs...

specially that 2 parted chorus is a killer...

great melancholical/atmospherical song...

handshake, Danke

Woww.. even i loved it ...can i use your track,,,,,? plsss

Love your vocals. Check it.

https://soundcloud.com/xxforeignmotionxx/chill

Ah, sure! I ran out of space on my Gmail account, do you use WhatsApp by any chance?

This is so beautiful, I am SO touched! I would love to sing this, and this is when I know I love a song. Congratulations! Do you have anything without vocals so I can work on it?

great song!

Sick work

i JUST PLAYED SOME SUBTLE HEAVY GUITAR ON THE CHORD CHANGES..i LIKED IT. U CAN TRY THAT

This is brilliant blueprint to make something more out of it! As far as this 2-minute bit goes I like it alot....wish you good luck in developing it further!:)

Congrats_____Orlando

Well, I must say - I really dig it. You literally could sing a song for him on his next CD and no one would tell the difference, no joke hahaha. That's awesome man!

ER

It's actually a great piece to work on "as is". I'll do a few things respecting it's concept ...

Keep rocking,
-Ramey

Brilliant!

To get a whole song, you should give place for the instruments...this is actually 2.20 singing...piano is very dreamy, use it separately...and the chorus, need some bomb :-) as a chorus...

Respect and handshake, Danke

I have a few ideas that I will work on with this. I hope you like them.

You totally remind me of Owl City. EXTREMELY similar lol. What do you use for the autotune effect?

ER

This track is really tight. To me your voice and this song is like a dark Owl City (compliment). What DAW did you do this on?

Cool stuff man, i'll be listening to more of your truck for inspiration. I would love a collaboration, i always want to try on this bit.
Keep the music playing

damn... this is sooo freekin' great makes me wanna just give up on music in a way cuz I fear I'll never be this good. :O You really inspire me at the same time to do better. Thank's so much for uploading this.