Maxomunz

It's a great music to be sung. A beautiful melody so sweet. Good keys in it.

i never cease to wonder what Pachelbel was on when this first came out - i mean, were there banana and peanut butter sandwiches in the 17th century? this is such a primal and infinitely adaptable song - and this is a truly beautiful setting.

There kind of right about the transitions but when it started i was picturing a movie trailer so i liked it.

very nice start. i somewhat agree with the other reviews that its slightly out of tune at points although its not a big deal. the beat definitely has emotion which is good and the drums are solid. the snare is a little over reverbed for my taste though. i love that guitar it really makes the beat drag in a good way... if that makes sense. overall very nice work. CF

my opinion its a great beat just needs alittle up speed on the tempo and some sounds here anther but its a great beat, im just saying my style is diffrent so im just saying what i would do to make it better...but nice job.

well...i'm just a vocalist, but the beginning sounds a little iffy. once into the beat i'm cool. the key change "thingee" was super cool, but after a while it started to sound out of tune [or somethin], i like the idea of the [breakdown/transition] effect it seemed you tried to accomplish, just needs to [perhaps] be smoother. like the strings in the end, adds a smoothness in all the raspy guitar and choppy piano. definetely can be better, but a really good idea of a start! :-) again, i'm just a vocalist!

Well like was said intro was a bit long but i feel more life coming from this than your others i like it. :)

no offence but this sounds like u used eminem love the way u lie changed the notes and used different instruments...

its very good its just that reminds me of love the way u lie...

Ok..I'm game,seems like a fair request...but don't feel obligated to return the favor,I don't roll that way...Straight out I don't like the intro..it's too long and tentative without getting anywhere,I'm saying this because people have a short attention span...However once you get into the groove proper...I dig it!..plenty of substance happening here with a nice flow to the mixups and drops....this will be a great vehicle for a rapper,it's got that ebb and flow which Imo is critical for a successful beat....cheers Planet

I like it man! You had alot more sense of a hip hop/rap beat than i did! i didn't even know at first that hip hop was at a "slowed" down tempo of 90 or lower. i always made beats at the default 120! lol man it sucked lol but this is pretty solid man, the mix could always be tweaked back on, and the maybe more could be added, but this is old stuff! and we move on! thanks for sharing this man! regards and respect

Neobane

Nice stuff fam...your brother has a cool flow with that tone in his voice your sister can get it to... dam impressed
all ya'll got talent.. you 3 should do suttin together.

it's a fav...

i love reversed sounds and shortbusmusic so it's cool, off to a great start - you should keep this version, but also work on another, have a few versions... just in case... ; ) Neal

needs more, sounds gud do

a very cool sound-poem - i dig the purity of this music a lot - plus how can we as loopers possibly go wrong with a guy like Bear - much respect

Agree with the others; do not be afraid to go crazy with heavy drum patterns on that one - keep it up!

Nicely done. Like MrJoker said, there is a lot of room for development....additional percussion and perhaps a wicked bass line. Then it would be ready for a great rapper to jump on. Lot's of potential for sure.

Bear

Im a big fan on reversing sounds and i like were ur going with this joint put some more time in to the track and it would be hot if u can get some hard drums and maybe distorted them i can hear the knock already not bad so far keep it up

nice track man. i would only suggest adding some stuff to change up the beat a little. maybe some bass? keep up the good work. CF

Niiiiice...feelin it...sounds like something eminem would get on

I like the general feeling. It chills and gives good vibes. I see you used Gross Beat, great use of it.

Nicely done. I like the way you "operated" on the loop and made it your own. Good job.

Bear