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Jmanshizzil

Jmanshizzil

Burleson, United States
Joined : 30th Jan 2011 - 14 years ago
Last Online : 21st Feb 2025 - 8 months ago
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DM87
DM87 13th Jul 2015 20:03 - 10 years ago

on Let Me Breathe ft Stephanie Kay by Jmanshizzil
You definitely meshed live drums and synths together nicely. I listen on my studio monitors and headphones and heard no disparity. Always remember to balance the setting between those two instuments where possible. Example: If synth is heavy reverb, then dry up the drums a bit so it'[s not overwhelming.

Good stuff man.
Cheers
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 21st Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Yeah, that's a good idea. I was thinking about sidechaining the synths to the kick and the reverb to the snare and toms which might help everything sit in the mix better.

Thanks!!
Onsi3
Onsi3 13th Jul 2015 18:53 - 10 years ago

on Let Me Breathe ft Stephanie Kay by Jmanshizzil
Even if this needed work its still quality well done

Onsi3
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 21st Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Awesome! Thank you!!
DJNESHH
DJNESHH 12th Jul 2015 14:25 - 10 years ago

on Chill Out Trance Track by Jmanshizzil
awesome track downloading now seems amazing
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 13th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Thank you! It means a lot!
mstmusic
mstmusic 9th Jul 2015 19:24 - 10 years ago

on Chill Out Trance Track by Jmanshizzil
Hello, are you looking for a collab for this? I think I really feel this tune as it's kind of trance I'm keen on. I could add some pretty nice things if you work on FL Studio. Contact me if it's possible :)
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 13th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
I'm always looking to work with others!
KLAUS7
KLAUS7 8th Jul 2015 22:24 - 10 years ago

on Chill Out Trance Track by Jmanshizzil
i would say it could use some club build up mix but original is good for chill out
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 13th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks for the feedback!
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 8th Jul 2015 21:57 - 10 years ago

on Let Me Breathe ft Stephanie Kay by Jmanshizzil
OOOOH. I love it. If you get those drums right, oh my goodness. This song will be amazing. That simple chord progression is so beautiful and you execute them via cool synths that I really dig. Very tastefully done. At the moment, the only thing is the drums sound too far back. :)

ER
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 13th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
I was trying to add space to the drums to make them sound like they were recorded live, but mixing acoustic drums with electronic synths is very difficult! I appreciate the kind words! I'll try to fix those drums up! :D
XyIlent
XyIlent 8th Jul 2015 17:28 - 10 years ago

on Let Me Breathe ft Stephanie Kay by Jmanshizzil
sounds cool man, maybe a little side chain on those big synths and cool beat behind it, then you could have a cool dance track
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 13th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Yeah I was trying to go for a "wall of noise" sound, but sidechain would probably help haha. Thanks for the comment!
XyIlent
XyIlent 8th Jul 2015 14:51 - 10 years ago

on Chill Out Trance Track by Jmanshizzil
hey, i really like this. Sounds awesome. maybe like a Kygo-esq dance song.
If your looking for some suggestions - its a tiny bit repetitive maybe adding an extra melody towards the end will keep peoples attention a bit more.. but thats just my thoughts :)

respect
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 8th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Yeah I was thinking the same as far as repetitiveness goes. Thanks for the kind words! and I appreciate the feedback!
Deadlyawake
Deadlyawake 8th Jul 2015 10:58 - 10 years ago

on Chill Out Trance Track by Jmanshizzil
Hi nice song
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 8th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Thank you!!
SimplicityBeats
SimplicityBeats 7th Jul 2015 21:16 - 10 years ago

on Chill Out Trance Track by Jmanshizzil
killer
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 8th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks!
ryansexmoney
ryansexmoney 7th Jul 2015 02:38 - 10 years ago

on Chill Out Trance Track by Jmanshizzil
love!
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 7th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Thank you! I appreciate it!
INFLOW
INFLOW 7th Jul 2015 01:05 - 10 years ago

on Chill Out Trance Track by Jmanshizzil
Pretty much what ShurelyTemper said but I have to say that I'm loving what you've got so far. The sounds you've made are chill as heck which I love and that kick and clap is very nice
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 7th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks so much! I'll work on getting the song composition a little more in line.
ShurelyTemper
ShurelyTemper 6th Jul 2015 19:58 - 10 years ago

on Chill Out Trance Track by Jmanshizzil
Hi jman. I can suggest a few ideas. Keep the main arp back for introduction at a slightly later part of the track. Start out with kick, snare, then bass, get a groove going then lead us into your main melody but don't give it all up so soon. Chop the main arp melody down into chunks & loop to tease us. But bring it in at the first major break, and defo get the real rhythm in earlier. finally introduce a new sound (strings or synth) that either lifts or toughens the melody.
Jmanshizzil
Jmanshizzil replied 7th Jul 2015 - 10 years ago
Yeah, I think you're right. A more traditional intro would probably sound better. Don't want to burn the listener out on the melody before it really even gets going. Thanks!
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