Don't let nobody fool you, this is really nice...
I would've not used the tuner on your lead vocal, the harmonies are cool
because their lines are short and to the point...
Your vocal didn't really need any help, it distorts you diction "what you are saying"...I know it helped you hit, some of those notes but I think you
could've done it, on your own and knocked this out of the park...
You can't hide behind that thing for ever, with your voice it should be just
a tool (that your voice don't need) but to sharpen a flat tone in a voice...
Not to become the voice...Just to much stuff on something that is already
really good...Believe me!!! This is just my observation...
Now...This what I'm talking about...
The voices are the melody that are waaaaaaaaay cool..
Very tastefully done, there is something missing to knock it
out of the park though...
Me.. I'm looking at this like, shes in your arms and you got the bone
on her, need something that's going to make her shake that thing to you...
A Synth doing something slick and nasty, or a Guitar dancing in the back
either way...It would give you that 3D feel in the mix as well with the
placement you have with the BV's... Real nice Work...
Everything you've done here is pretty sweet. My only complaint is that the vocal source sounds a little "boxy" maybe a little treatment on the vocal track would set it off. The relative volumes are perfect, but the mix isn't quite gripping the vocals in front center yet. Great vocal performances and a tight track composition. Hope you keep working on it. Very nice!
-Slimm
I Like it Man!!!! I would be down to drop a Verse on that . I only rap in German but it will make it billingual . So check out my Profile listen through my Tracks and let me Know if I would fit on your Track. greetz from overseas Berlin Germany.
on Be Your Boyfriend by TRSTAR
I would've not used the tuner on your lead vocal, the harmonies are cool
because their lines are short and to the point...
Your vocal didn't really need any help, it distorts you diction "what you are saying"...I know it helped you hit, some of those notes but I think you
could've done it, on your own and knocked this out of the park...
You can't hide behind that thing for ever, with your voice it should be just
a tool (that your voice don't need) but to sharpen a flat tone in a voice...
Not to become the voice...Just to much stuff on something that is already
really good...Believe me!!! This is just my observation...
It's a really good track otherwise...
Peace...TG.
on Say Yeah by TRSTAR
Keep up the good work,
-R.P.S
on Say Yeah by TRSTAR
Very well done. FT
on Say Yeah by TRSTAR
The voices are the melody that are waaaaaaaaay cool..
Very tastefully done, there is something missing to knock it
out of the park though...
Me.. I'm looking at this like, shes in your arms and you got the bone
on her, need something that's going to make her shake that thing to you...
A Synth doing something slick and nasty, or a Guitar dancing in the back
either way...It would give you that 3D feel in the mix as well with the
placement you have with the BV's... Real nice Work...
Top Shelf Stuff My Man....
PEACE...TG.
on Girlfriend by TRSTAR
on Drop The World by TRSTAR
on If I Die Before I Wake by TRSTAR
Gramo/Neo
on If I Die Before I Wake by TRSTAR
and you got the vocals smooth on there
Did you made the beat too or only the vocals?
Nevertheless thanks for sharing and keep them coming
on Hold On Trap Mix by TRSTAR
on If I Die Before I Wake by TRSTAR
on The Cold by TRSTAR
on Pushin by TRSTAR
on Girlfriend by TRSTAR
on Got Me Twisted Feat Shawn Styles by TRSTAR
-Slimm
on Got Me Twisted Feat Shawn Styles by TRSTAR
well written
on Got Me Twisted Feat Shawn Styles by TRSTAR
Tune D
on Apologize by TRSTAR
Tune D
on Hold On Trap Mix by TRSTAR
Greetz from Berlin Germany
on It Doesnt Matter by TRSTAR
Steve
on It Doesnt Matter by TRSTAR
All the best_____Orlando
on Best You Ever Had by TRSTAR
on Get At You by TRSTAR
on It Doesnt Matter by TRSTAR
you've got talent....nice work
Tune D
on Automatic Instrumental by TRSTAR
on Anniversery Party by TRSTAR