give those vocals some more expression. This track sounds really good but the vocal performance will need the same kind of attention. I think you are saying some really good stuff in here but the delivery may not be expressing those words as well as it could. Make sure they are on tempo in every part. These are the same kind of issues i work on also. I think the delivery of the vocals is so key. That would make this song top notch! keep up the good work.
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good flow and catchy hook
keep it up man
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Great track
John
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but the flows are dope i like the track it gets play in my ride
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