luvroxu

That is a good one mate.

Happy birthday for yesterday.
This is a great track.
Well done.

happy up and coming young man, dont forget to bring us a birthday treat to share your day. your doing real well, Cru's reply is good advice, the hardest part IS production, it is the one thing that gives any track the scent of professionalism

Hey Luvroxu, congrats on the birthday!! I love seeing your talent and you posting loads of stuff, that's great. You have a sound but you're not repeating yourself, and that's even better. I hope you found a community here that helps and stimulates you, because having fun with this is so important!
Regarding the track, I agree with Steve that there's an audible distortion you can probably get rid of; you possibly maxed out something. Try to fix that and it will be even better, because this is a fun track.
Keep creating, I can hear the joy and excitement and the talent!

Happy Birthday. When I was your age I was just as excited as you to make music, and so great job on you for putting it out there for us to listen to, as I love the arpeggios and the 808 bass, really good choices musically. I want you to go back and lower the main bus gain and then re-master with a compressor/limiter so that the drums don't clip as much and sound distorted. The hardest part of music production is the actual production part. That is the key to sounding professional. What you eventually want is to find space dynamically for all these cool instruments you chose to shine in the mix. There are some free tools that can help you sound even better than what you have done. And there is so much info on the production side to absorb. But I really like how you approached this and made it work, so great job. So you know I only critique like this for the artists who I hear have great potential to grow and do good things ;-)
Cru

Lots of energy. It's a bit relentless, could use a drop or low/high pass filter sweep breakdown (or something) to break up the sections.

You have a sound in the background that starts at 1:20 and ends about 1:40. I think it is a peak in the 4K frequency range resembling feedback (it happens again from 2:05 to the end). I would put an eq on your "bitty arps" and remove the peak (4K spikes cause permanent hearing damage).

Just some things to think about, keep it up.

Hello, We at Jackal Studios want to put this song in our upcoming cyberpunk anime called UndaWorld. We would like you to be on the team! I will give you my discord that way you can join us with music production (we also need voice actors) moving along I await your reply...

Discord: Zakku Revu~enanto#4818 (I know I posted on another one of your songs but I like this one to)

Ahh perfect.

bro this is defo platformer music, this could be used in a building something part were its a time section, its chirpy and fun and would appeal to the young uns, lot slower tempo than usual you got a headache :))) and you just uploaded a fresh one i'll check it later

This is a lot of fun - making me smile

Solid beats, warm synth, nice melodies, choice vocal and foley ...

Great production sound too : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) etc.

This track is an ace mate.
Well done.
Maj

nice bro, little slower bpm like the delay you got here, nice melody and fx good tune

This is my favorite of your tracks! The intro is very musical, and the beat is strong.
I was going to make the same remark as Ian/Pseudoble that the beat is distorteling; maybe you did that on purpose (which is fine of course) but you can consider turning that and/or the master volume down a bit, so you would also have a bit more dynamics.
I like what you did though, keep creating!! Good stuff, you can be really proud.

bro i love this its fooking banging, all your tracks are a million miles an hour real good mix bro i can feel the blood pumping through your veins. well done yet again

Hey.
I love that intro.
The whole track is brilliant.
Well done.
Maj

gone inn hard with this one luvroxu like the loud kick arse beat and the melody like the glitched effect you got with the distortion, you got your own style bro, keep it up you throwing some around lately

is it okay to use this as a base for an fnf track?

Thats a wild ride - the kick/sub is perhaps a little overdriven (i'd be inclined to have it clipping a little less but it does add a certain nasty edge to the tune) a strong melodic loop too - getting into earworm territory - good work : )

Yeah that should be what my local ice cream van plays when he pulls up outside my house.

ok bro you should try the game producer with your stuff, you never know. if your a gamer video yourself playing put your track over it and put it on tik-tok if it gets plenty views people that need to notice may notice :)) only a thought tho, you might be happy as is

sounds like a bonus section on a platformer bro nice job, no im not a gamer to old now :)) used to play the best space invader pacman defender pheonix lol

this is so crazy, i like

It's so hyper & totally reminds me of that old meme caramelldansen!