2secondimpression

When I was a kid I use to buy bass CDs this track reminds me of that great job man keep up the good works.

I really like this song you sound in tune to me have you performed this live any where or is it on the radio great job!!

love this man. u got ur own sound going on there. keep it up :)

i really like this man. its one thing making a track on computer but actually singing and playing your own instrument is something else. well done. i enjoyed listening to it :) thanks for reviewing my tracks :)

Nice job man, I like the vocals on this, the way they sound set the mood of the track nicely. Not sure some of the tips offered regarding the vocals are really what this track needs, I think it would change the atmosphere of the song and take away from it.

you gotta an imaginative mind, and it's reflected in this track.

Great work mate, gotta a nice track here, keep up the excellent job

Gabz

Great stuff, Drum, bass and birds gives you a feel that you are walking alone in the forest enjoying. The effects put final nail. Keep them coming. God bless

Wonderful song. Good pace and great voice. A great performance with a great pace. Very good and fresh.

I agree with DigitalSyy,... indie sounding!

As to the vocal recording: I say this to all people that do this, so don't be disheartened...

I think that recording identical vocal tracks and then layering them together sounds tacky on their own, especially when played throughout the whole track. I've never been a fan of it...

I would STRONGLY suggest recording:

a) a harmony (one octave up but in a different key)

b) an *almost* "spoken" version of the lyrics

c) a recording in a lower register, (depending on your range at present and octave or two lower)

and then panning these extra bits either left or right in key parts of the track to add depth. (not all the way through the track though)

Don't be afraid to use your chest voice either! this is where the power comes from (all of which can be learned from DL'ing Brett Manning's singing success from btjunkie - but I didn't tell you that ;) )

A simple - but GREAT example is "Hoobastank - the reason" very subtle, but very powerful. Study the vocals in that...

Like you, this chap doesn't use vibrato, but still sounds amazing!

Hope this puts you in the right direction for fulfilling your vocal ambitions :)

If you wanna pick my brains or whatever, email me at ggardiner86@aol.com

Toonz!

I like the track, It has many cinematic possibilities. Definitely a great track to play while watching the mysterious, dark figure stalking its prey.

John

Excellent vocals, I agree with 3dfx, reminds Simon & Garfunkel ... Smooth and mellow this track. Great job.

peace. / VlaRB

Fantastic! Experienced Musican... Reminds off Simon & Garfunkel :)

So indie! lol
Good job, reminds me of a "non electro" MGMT. Your voice.
With the right stuff, you could be big

Nice track homie !!!

Ya voice @ 1.05 min sounds like Bob Marley fo real, if he is still among uz !!! Respect, Dude !!!! Chill dub beat - well done, man !!!

Peace out,

Da Colonel ( also wit abelton ) & dont try dat autotune stuff on this track !!!

Great tune ;)
I like the mood created by your voice :)

The beats are way too tinny for my liking...maybe download some breaks from this site to give a better sound,not bad for a beginner effort though ...

This is put together real well the only thing i picture is what some of the other reviewers already advised some more cymbol work definitly and vocals a tad louder and some more effect work on the drums and bingo this is a classic dnb track!

A mix of the older side of Dnb it works! The levels are a little high on some volumes of the hats and horns but i love me some dnb on occasion ") the samples worked too

Very original. I never really got into the dubstep style this is definitly original and i think i like it. the vocals are almost jamaicani to me ")

Sounds like sort of Dj Magic Mike in away ...good job not many bass songs out there for cars like mine ...im sure my 4 12" Jl audio's will love it!!!

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Nice delays, effects are great, and the sound of birds, make it very interesting, it helps with the melody to get a hypnotic track, it's a chill out dubstep, a very nice one mate

Good work 2seconimpression

Gabz

I'm still in the process of developing a taste for dubstep, but I definitely like this one.

Great work, My Friend

John

The track is really nice especially the vocals but you could use some heavier synths.. i don't know it's just my opinion. I like it a lot anyways nice job!

Nice.Probably heard it b4.KidCudistyle?You produce all?Have you tried it wit autotune?Might go with the beat better?