need to add bit of high frequecies in your voice recording, and less low frequency makes your voice more rhythmical, wil make your voice clicking with the drums. you got something in your song, hip hop needs more , little more of conjunctions in rhythms.
more words means busy, busy can be chaos, if you can make it in a perfect rhyhtmic row, then it will be like one achievement
nerdcore
it's absurdcore but i'd like 2 have
heard more
you chirp lore and blurt more
with words hard to ignore
some may naysay
like u a wannabe peaches
surfin those waves
on the hawaiian beaches
but you hit me like a truck
usin words like capricious
so WTF you got me stuck
like a bad case of leeches
Man I love this! I have to say I love your style. The beat of this was catchy as hell and I loved the way you put a melody into the rhymes.. much enjoyed here :) Lisa
this combination sounds great,it´s an own style
the beginning reminds me of mr robot´s vst plug in acidizer,couldn´t follow all the lyrics so have to listen some more times and download
thx for your mail but i´ve no idea what you mean when
you said awesome and you will use it in your next track
tight history lesson i gotta feel it.. aight story... vocals is a lil loud on this but you aint really from the 70's thou are you, you soound like 15 or so... be sure to peep some of my tracks...
you kewl girl got some tight style... you prolly could blow up fo real... you jus got dat sound... haha lyrics is pretty tight in this one but again flow is a lil off i mean its on beat... but jus stumble wit your flow in a few parts keep at it...
this some wierd shit...kewl no doubt... flow is a lil off but you vocals sound kewl maybe you shoud had a lil less reverb thou... you keepin it real thou keep doin ya thing...
i so appreciate those who said i need to adjust vols. (i agree)Gonna tweak track in a less christmas filled moment in time, thanks for all the support and advice.
rofl....i swear, every time I listen to your songs I laugh so hard. But in a good way. Such random lyrics...its like a live freestyle from somebody who knows what there doing.
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more words means busy, busy can be chaos, if you can make it in a perfect rhyhtmic row, then it will be like one achievement
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it's absurdcore but i'd like 2 have
heard more
you chirp lore and blurt more
with words hard to ignore
some may naysay
like u a wannabe peaches
surfin those waves
on the hawaiian beaches
but you hit me like a truck
usin words like capricious
so WTF you got me stuck
like a bad case of leeches
diggin u like a grave, Peace and Music- Trey
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love your spit.you have talent.
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[wink]..lol
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keep it up also thanx 4 da review on "you know ft gemini"
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the beginning reminds me of mr robot´s vst plug in acidizer,couldn´t follow all the lyrics so have to listen some more times and download
thx for your mail but i´ve no idea what you mean when
you said awesome and you will use it in your next track
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myspace.com/mos39request
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However, you need to learn to use compression on your vocals better, and the delay is offputting.
You dont vocalise enough either, just sounds like youre in your room not wanting your mom to hear or something. Be a bit more BLAH!
This is constructive crit, respect to you for writing pretty tight, but Im a picky fucker when it comes to production :P
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also thanks for the comment on my track, and also yes I do rap & produce.
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