I like this at around 70%. The beat is great, the chords are nice, the rap works for me. But it needs a variation, a verse, a break, etc. Also, the melody doesn't really work for me.
I think if you fix that, you have a really strong song, so keep going at it!
on KungFuSomething by PhillyBe
I think if you fix that, you have a really strong song, so keep going at it!
on NewGospel by PhillyBe
Nice Work indeed Bravo!