I like this track has a good Boom Bap feel to it. For a bit of constructive criticizm just me personally i think u can cut the legnth of the hihat make it a lil tighter in sound could give space to another hi hat or even a vocal. Just a thought. Otherwise sweet work!
dude i love this track its straight bomb! i like the rhyme style too. its cool cause it kinda threw me off a bit cause i was wondering what u where going to say next. hahaha unpredictable. nice to hear some rhymes that are fresh and unique sounding. good work on the vocal effects too.
beats not bad, the tempo is a little off so it doesnt flow quite right, might need to speed the beat up so it flows better, keep at it though, i should have a few more acapellas in the future
i redid it but i have to wait to upload it. cause i'm at my limit for the week. But i can email it to you I'd rather get it right before i post it again also.
hey Lendy, actually ur name sticks out in my head because i watch Dexter a lot. son i like ur flow, somehow it is making me smile.
u got lots of potential. with ur voice if u perfect ur flow, it would be as original as ever. and as for the beat. it does well too. who made it??
also, i heard u do a small blow sound with ur mouth, man! let me hook u up on those things, use an effect instead of ur voice, it makes it closer to being pro. and with ur rap, get it all together organized, redo this thing and u got yourself a master piece. truly, i feel the potential in this one. this is about the longest comment i have ever given i think, whew!!
respect on to u!!
thanx alot bro your the 3rd person since i've been doing this to give me a positive feed back.I really appreciate it.i workin on my flow and work some local people who are willing to work with me.As far as the beat i got from shadowville i'm reg to the site and i added a few things to it to give it my twist. i since have ventured into making my own beats.i'll post one up the one i am in need of that clip i did it my self but will still change it to the one you have. Is it you in the clip?thats even better if it is. i'll end up changing it and adding it as the chorus to.thats where i got the name from.you'll see check it out.and i up loaded another song as well.peace Lendy Len
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old skool rap, think you should put more emotion on you delivery but like your lyrics
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peace
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-Good work.:)
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u got lots of potential. with ur voice if u perfect ur flow, it would be as original as ever. and as for the beat. it does well too. who made it??
also, i heard u do a small blow sound with ur mouth, man! let me hook u up on those things, use an effect instead of ur voice, it makes it closer to being pro. and with ur rap, get it all together organized, redo this thing and u got yourself a master piece. truly, i feel the potential in this one. this is about the longest comment i have ever given i think, whew!!
respect on to u!!
DextDee