lets review and listen shall we? Love the gate panning and the entire progression. aww, i was hoping for a long snare roll going into that first chorus.. So definitely the arp is good, all around. I do feel as though the percussion could be stepped up in the chorus parts fer sure. I was missing it. That and I think it could use another instrument like a short synth repeating a melody and effecting that. Just a suggestion. Good so far! Check me out.
I think this track is just fine how it is. All you need to work on now is getting some lyrics on their. Probably some kind of story in the verse that builds from a small theme to a huge theme or epiphany. Keep up the good work and by the way the bass bangs pretty nice on a subwoofer.
sick beat man, you got your production skills up to a great standard.. the beat is flawless.. nice instruments used aswell bro.. and good choice of vocals.. keep it up man..
yea must admit bro this is a good track.. some vocals would go nicely on this one.. loving the strings some nice touches throughout..keep up the good work man. peace
As I just wrote to John, ive put vox on it and it changed the feel of the track significantly (for the better). So lets hope i get permission to post that :p
Haha, thanks a lot! I have put some vocals just to try the beat out with some. It does sound very good and people that have heard it likes it a lot. Just need permission from the loopermans vocals ive used then ill post that to.
This is mad as hell. Don't know where its gonna be when it's finished but damn its already bumpin. Tag this track man, can't let peeps run off with this. Cheers :D
Haha, thanks a lot, man! Im still working on it but im a bit stuck at the moment. So ill leave it until i feel like im really inspired and motivated to continue. Will let you know asap when its done!
This is gonna be great! Could use a good rap, enough of them on Looperman!
Dont let the orchestral thing go on all the song, better use it as sort of chorus.
Let me know if you changed anything, like to hear what it's gonna be!
Thank you, sir! I agree. Its just the first render so it will be changed again. Im thinking about having the lower and maybe mid strings in the verse then kick in the high at the chorus. We'll see what happens. Thanks for the review.
i like this!! i would like to hear the dirtier synth that comes in a bit early, cuz for a few moments there, it just sounded to clean. i make really dirty stuff tho, so ....
ew!! love the flute. it makes all the cleanliness beautiful actually. so i'd maybe bring in touches of the flute earlier cuz they give this a really wonderful, crystalline spring sort of flavor. nice work!!
THanks for reviewning.
I want it to be like a slow type of pop (or whatever) song so i decided to keep it rather "clean". Maybe have a RnB singer on it who sings about his long lost love or some crap like that.
But as ive stated earlier its a work in progress so it might change dramatically. Or stay the same way. Who knows :D
THanks again.
What I don't like about this track:
- Some of those nasty screaming voice samples
They don't really fit in...
- the Snare/clap sound.. You should look for a different one
That's just my opinion. (the snare ROLLS are just how they're supposed to be though)
Things I do like about this track:
-Everything else!
Really apart from those lil' things I mentioned above, this has everything it takes for a Club/hiphop beat. good job ;)
btw: Maybe some ClichÃÂ-"I'm in tha club" lyrics? ;D
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Dont let the orchestral thing go on all the song, better use it as sort of chorus.
Let me know if you changed anything, like to hear what it's gonna be!
Paul.
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WHY ??? lol
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ew!! love the flute. it makes all the cleanliness beautiful actually. so i'd maybe bring in touches of the flute earlier cuz they give this a really wonderful, crystalline spring sort of flavor. nice work!!
I want it to be like a slow type of pop (or whatever) song so i decided to keep it rather "clean". Maybe have a RnB singer on it who sings about his long lost love or some crap like that.
But as ive stated earlier its a work in progress so it might change dramatically. Or stay the same way. Who knows :D
THanks again.
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- Some of those nasty screaming voice samples
They don't really fit in...
- the Snare/clap sound.. You should look for a different one
That's just my opinion. (the snare ROLLS are just how they're supposed to be though)
Things I do like about this track:
-Everything else!
Really apart from those lil' things I mentioned above, this has everything it takes for a Club/hiphop beat. good job ;)
btw: Maybe some ClichÃÂ-"I'm in tha club" lyrics? ;D
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I think a person has to be insane not to love strings :D
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