thanks! oh the lyrics are definetly emotional, my passion is more in the rnb tracks than the hip-hop. the lyrics starts at the verse: Inside im feeling, not quite right, my hearts giving up but it wants to fight, everything building up to one single thing... changes to life that love will really bring, but you know this girlll, and ill show this worrrlld, to ya baby i know that cha need a plan, a man in your life to lend a helping hand and please dont be surprised at what my heart says , it could all be lies, mabye instead well find a way to work around all these messes give it a try and see where life takes us as the world slowly spins around , ill spin with you until im in the ground , baby this fire in my heart is burning mee, needin your love to extinguish mee..
okw ell that was the whole 1st verse, i sing real good and it sounds awesome, i reherse it daily to sharpen vocals on it, let me know what you think please :D and thnx for review xD
Kinda reminds me of some Outkast type stuff. Copyrighted via US mail. Lol thats awesome. I forgot you could do that. Just send a cd to yourself and dont open it right?
Nice. I like the piano work. Smooth track man. Mabey throw some strings or some synth in there. Hell if you want I will take a shot at throwing some synth melodies in this. Could consider it a collabo. Let me know if you are interested. I would just need to know the bpm.
Thanks man, yea take a shot st it see what ya can throw in, i believe it is at 95 bpm, ill have to pull up my studio prog to make sure, but for now ill say its that
ugh..this track is beautifully sad. your melody is heart-wrenching. why do i see this scene of a guy begging a girl to let him back in the house, and theyre both struggling at the door; one trying to shut it, the other trying to push it open. the piano work is sublime...masterfully juxtoposed with the accompanying synth harmony. very emotional piece.
well done!
yea this was my favorite beat as well as my 5th beat i ever did, over a year or so ive lost the good quality version as well as the studio file too, it has a staticy high amp noice in some parts that shouldnt be there, but i still like it too :D my other rnb beat on here is good too, im trying tom ake more slow jams cuz i have better rythme than i do rap
the drop is so smooth on this..the listener really has no idea what the beat pattern will be by the side stick...but the kick comes in and lays the fundation for a head noddin beat. i think you could have so much more fun with this piece. its simple, yet naughty the way it is...but i would love to hear you add some more elements. perhaps some bass tones to follow the synth, or a higher synth with an accompanying harmony to give it some dimention and allow for some change ups. nothing too crazy tho, cause i really like the chill vibe of this track. either way...
nice work!
thanks ! :D yeah i want to go back and add alot of things to some of my beats but a thief stole my laptop along with my backup hard drive that had all the studio files of the beats on it :( i could just add them the hard way using the mp3 file but just wouldnt be the same :/
absolutely a nasty freestlyle track spittin vennow eneemy lettin em know the Emcee strategy hip hop skill drop like profecy beats tight like anatomy ha ha here we go thank you for this
Sick track right here bro
Surprised so little plays.
That mandolin in the background gives it an asian feel
Strings and Pizz' are dope
Drums got my head bangin' too
yea ive been debating to take out the gunshots and sirens on the hooks and mabye leave just on the intro, but everyones reviews on it are exactly what i want to hear, since im still only about a year into the beat makin, so im always up for opinions from more exp ppl, thanks !
that beat drop was a pleasant surprise. like how you used the piano loop. thee strings are a bit synthy for my taste, but they fit nicely with the piece.
and yes..everyone does make beats here. but i dont see the harm in telling people yours are up for sale. it cant hurt lol.
good work!
Thanks! yeah the strings can be toned down a lil bit but this is why im up for hearing reviews. im only about a year into the beat makin buisness so im always up to taking advice from more exp ppl. Thanks for listening :)
yea i composed it using virtual vst keyboard on sony acid studio, only the hi hats were a loop, im just starting in this biz, i have no studio equiptment except protools mbox and a mic =)~ thnx for listening =D
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okw ell that was the whole 1st verse, i sing real good and it sounds awesome, i reherse it daily to sharpen vocals on it, let me know what you think please :D and thnx for review xD
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nice
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well done!
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Surprised so little plays.
That mandolin in the background gives it an asian feel
Strings and Pizz' are dope
Drums got my head bangin' too
Keep it up man
Respect from LA
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piano drums n horns r nice n its very well put together
sick track yo
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and yes..everyone does make beats here. but i dont see the harm in telling people yours are up for sale. it cant hurt lol.
good work!
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did you composed it by yourself or is it a loop ? ..anyway nice one bro.
thank you for sharin
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good work.