Very nice arangement. I think this would really benefit from some real drums / percussion and the addition of some other instruments to add interest - really good work.
Hi there - thanks for the listen - You're quite right - This is where I get exposed for my lack of knowledge or dare I say it ignorance....I can't play a single instrument - absolutely nothing - I'm just a Lyricist/Singer - Hopefully I'll get better with acid pro and cover my tracks better lol - Thanks again for the encouragement J.
Beautiful track. Everything comes well together. Reminds me of a Muji album I got while in Japan. Though I must say that at times, this track does get quite repetitive. If the repetitiveness could be overcome, this would shine even brighter. Oh, it also ends abruptly so that needs to be polished off I think. This has potential.
Hi thanks for taken time out to listen to this - Most of the tracks you'll find from me are of a repetitive nature mostly due to the fact I build them for vocal songs rather than soundscapes. I would like to make some really dark brooding ambient soundscape but I really don't have the tech ability at the moment to try it out - ignorance on my part as I cant play a single instrument - I'm hopeing my vocal versions of the tracks will help fill the gaps until I get more used to acid pro. Thanks ever so much for the encouragement. J.
Thanks for the listen matey - Glad you enjoyed - I'm really just a singer/lyricist - What you find on here are my 1st tryouts with acid pro - I can't play a single intstrument so this site is a bit of a goldmine - although really hard to find what I'm looking for most of the time lol! J.
Nice track you have here....good catchy beat. But I noticed you uploaded this in June and that you were going to add a vocal track later. Well.....come on man; it's now December....get to it(big smile)!! You've got a good thing going.....looking forward to hearing more from you. -Ken
Oh wow!...I see you DO have a version of this song with the vocal track. Great job! Terrific vocals on that one...I love the sound. Sorry about the oversight....that's what happens to some folks when they start turning into an old man(sheepish grin this time). Cheers. -Ken
Hey, I listened to this before you added vocals....GREAT JOB! I have always been a huge fan of groups like The Beat and this reminds me of a mellow kinda of tribute and I hope you take that as a positive thing. I really like the groove. Your accent fits the track perfect. Great job...Can't wait to hear more!
Sorry for late reply to this - but thanks ever so much for a listen to this - Its not really my accent - It just kinda fitted the song lyrics i came up with.....but listening to it again - I think it will need a rework as I'm just a bit to Oliver 'Please Sir - Can I have some more'....lolol - I now remind myself why I never try to cover a Bowie track......haha! cheers J.
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Oh wow!...I see you DO have a version of this song with the vocal track. Great job! Terrific vocals on that one...I love the sound. Sorry about the oversight....that's what happens to some folks when they start turning into an old man(sheepish grin this time). Cheers. -Ken
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