First - critique, vocals need to be adjusted. That is a minor issue however, and Im sure by now the issue has been addressed :)
The song has a great vibe that, like danke said, would really have a nice spin with some sort of gospel section to really fire it up. Great song you have here, looking forward to the finished product!
Thanks Danke, i appreciate the fav my friend, i laid vocals on it a little while ago and was kinda back and fourth bout using this one, but coming from awesome musicians such as yourself seeing potential in it makes me feel good about the decision to use this a song on the Afflictions album, Thanks, Larry
Hey Larry, nice track. Sounds like this will be a winner for your album. I notice around :47 that the lead vocal volume sets behind the background vocals. It would sound better if it matched the level of :15. This track is going to be tight when you adjust.
Thanks Ronabo, i appreciate you taking a listen to this one, its just a rough draft as of now, nothing been mixed on it, some how that vocal got turned down, but good artist can hear what needs work in a song, i appreciate that my friend, Larry
bro! produced and mastered this is gonna be a HIT
no doubt
love the base
really talented man definitely looking forward to your album as well as seeing this song finished
peace and love
-CAP
Thanks tsochai, i almost gave up on the music thing, but i had a few good people around me telling me i would regret it if i did, im working on everything being mastered and mixed, just in the mixing stage right now, the album should be acceptable, i hope so anyways, but thanks my friend, Larry
Yeah, i kinda felt it was a bit much reverb, but luckly this is only a rough draft and not the final production and breaks are a must, gives artist space to shine, but anyways thanks for the listen.
you have some good sounds but it feel the same all the way you try work on make some changes to the track or maybe in your next track but so far it good. keep up the good work.
LOL!!! i guess eventually after a while everything begins to sound the same, but i get what your saying, the truth is, i play with raw emotion, so sometimes i can play out the same emotion from time to time...well not the same extact emotion but close, thanks for giving this a listen, Larry
I feel the trax bro! Music is a part us all, its a universal language that can be spoken without words. Sometimes life throws the curve ball, and when it does, music is there to allow expression. All will be well bro, I enjoyed the trax and look forward to your return.
I'm witcha man, the music I put out are my own hopes, dreams and battles with life. I make music to self reflect from that exact time in life. It's self healing, to me at least. And if people like it, and can relate, because they're going through the same sh*t, well I'm here for that. Safe journeys man, keep moving. Diggin' the track.
Thanks Format, i really appreciate the encouragement my friend, we all as musicians need to push each other to become great, thanks for checking out this track. Larry
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The song has a great vibe that, like danke said, would really have a nice spin with some sort of gospel section to really fire it up. Great song you have here, looking forward to the finished product!
Brado
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could be some gospelish part in it and it'll be ready for the 'sing together' attitude in concert...:-)
handshake, Danke
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Ronabo
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no doubt
love the base
really talented man definitely looking forward to your album as well as seeing this song finished
peace and love
-CAP
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Keep pushing man. You got it.
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