SteveLewis

Love the rap and female vocal - that rap is so on point and tight! Kay0s

Such an original title. Great beat and the female vocal circa 1.48 pads out the urgency of the lyric and tight rap wonderfully. Kay0s

When my earphones start bouncing I know its going to be good and it didnt disappoint excellent.

This is well mixed, reminds me of the 2016 SoundCloud era. Well done!

Sounds like a professional track from the charts)

The rap works so well on this - good job Kay0s

Great mix all the way through. Respect

good mix guys well done

Nice sound production, vox are tight and showcased well by the slick trap beats, energentic pulse and sweet pads and bass tones. the female vox is a treat too

Tight as nice track good drums good job man

Your vocal captures the intensity of the futility of the situation, your voice is a perfect fit. Raw but pleasant. When the female vocal came in to join the song, that was a wow moment - she has a beautiful voice that contrasts the raw with the sweet perfectly. Love the beat. Brilliant. Kay0s

Im sorry to throw a wrench in the works, but I think youre really close to perfecting the beat behind the vocals - the only thing I would change is turning down the vocals
So that they blend a little better, other than that its perfection

Hi SteveL....just listened to the track and enjoyed....very good vocals and nice tight music intensity, it's a good track my friend.

Would you consider hopping on a more electronic-y track? I like your cadence and think it would fit well with that style

Nice track, keep it coming

Very well done track of the trap genre. You really know how to do it and it is successful. I liked the unexpected female voice plus the final touch with the trumpet. A very good production in total.
Wish you the best, Anthony

Cool track man enjoyed my listen

I love the space-iness of this. What kind of reverb plugins did you use?

Loving the style!!

Legendary!

It has a professional profile you know. Right before I listened to your song I had my headphones on, listening to Spotify. I felt no serious difference and this means you are doing a very good job.
My best wishes, Anthony

nice work Steve, good loop use, great tight vocal sits right in the mix, the beat is lit, double tempo hats half times, great trap. 'nothing to lose' 'something i could teach you about' fire lines from the rapper, great listen

Which part of the track is you? the vocals are nice and so is the mix

It is a complete work, your piece of music. You cannot tell differences from the professional ones that we listen to, every day.
Really well done Steve
Best wishes, Anthony

real cool

This blurs a lot of lines. On a crative front; on one hand I like the drill-style of rapping here mixed with the blues guitar.

Gonna play this again in my car so I can hear the bassline but this could benefit from a strong angry bassline as heard in odece's piece "betrayal"