yeti09

I second melodysongbird's comments. This is an engaging song that takes you to a corner at a dimly lit country dancehall with some old time strolling and belly-rubbin,' caution-to-the-wind in your plaid starched shirt and straight-legged jeans all looking like George Strait. yahoooooooooooo....vigwig

Hey Damian,

The name of the song definitely fits, although I'm not sure the genre is rock. What I like about the song is that it has a soundtrackish feel to it so it could be fitting as a background music, but on the other hand if you want this to be a real song you would need vocals, because without them it sounds kind of monotone.

Cheers!

I am not so sure about movie track,but it can be good rock song,of cors you would have to rework composition a bit.just one constractive "critisism":i think voice doesnt "sit" well in a mix,pops out a bit ,if you catch my thread,rest done well,regads!

very good

seems more like hip hop / rap? nice work. great intensity.

Really cool little tune man!
Id love to have a go mixing this and maybe adding a little guitar if you could upload the individual tracks. Im sure some others would be interesed in mixing it too! it would be interesting to listen to the different mixes.

This one for sure needs no rap part.
It is cool like it is
I really enjoyed the listen!
But if you still think you need something to fill the instru part, try a solo and or some La La La (or Ho Ho HO or Hey Hey Hey Hey or a mix of them or something else) singing in this same fresh style. People love this sort of parts. They can sing to them and even don't have to know any words at all.

Well done yeti09

stay tuned
joe

I like it! Very radio friendly and catchy. Yeah who likes Monday morning!
Keep doing your thing man, learn by doing!

Blessings. - B

super cool pop/punk attitude and music here...on my humble opinion, it doesn't need any (shit) speech...:-)
it works on it's own and it's uplifting, happy, fantasticly positive...

standing ovation, Danke

very, very cool...though if it's chill out I'm the Pope...:-)

atmospheric, sensitive vocal work with an absolutely king contrabass...

unique track, standing ovation, Danke

(the end is abrupt, let the last organ note flow a bit more seconds...)

what a wonderful track! it's an unusual choice and it was a great surprise listening to it!

the fifties are back! you made this one successfully! the AM radio filter on your voice bring a brilliant result! and this classical bass line typical from this period: mmmmm good taste :)

Bleep

I love the chords. The cymbal crash every 8 beats is a bit annoying, and your vocals would have been sweet if you used some vintage reverb as well.

Good job overall

OM this is great, now you just need to add a killer chorus to it and we have a NO1 in 1958.
great work
Cru

Hey man, sounds nice, although the mixdown could be a bit better (the background is a little bit to loud i guess), but otherwise it sounds really good. :)

"At the football, I learned some words. I can't use them in school." LOL

This is pretty a pretty great track. I'm taking baby steps to coach my daughter. She loves messing around with my MIDI keyboard and singing. She's 4 currently.

Love seeing parents share their interests with their child and letting them be part of something, opposed to just throwing them in front of a screen. Good job boys! :)

i really like it...your boy has a nice voice... cool concept..keep up the good work..polished up this could be a classic hit