MrJoKerFaCe

Sweet track you got it is real hot just maybe needs a small break or change somewhere or it just maybe that it needs the vox in there to make it a bit different in some areas, real good job with it bro...

great track very good work
kerry :)

I this the track rocks. Spoken work vocals would work extremely well over this piece. Rapping, if it didn't diminish the track, could probably work as well. But this is a sweet piece to be played with carefully.

Faved. If you would like to send me a copy of this track, I would appreciate it very much.

John

I agree... Cinematic comes to mind once this starts going. Could make for a great movie joint!

not exactly a banger persay but i would say an evolution "to a video cinematic kind of track" this isn't something i would say someone would rap to, its more of a let the instruments be the music type of track.

really love what you did with it though, just saying what i got from it.

i like the concept of the strings and the voices in the background are very well done. good job. keep doing what you do

Nice work, minimal and interesting. The licks and rev cymbals are all in the places you would expect them to be, the one thing i would say is the hook needs to fade out and be replaced by something else once in a while, I understand that its trance but it would make the track more interesting.

You could even make a duplicate of the riff and replace it with another sound, add some effects, delays, reverb etc, just to give it a little boost in the right places.

In no way is that a critisism, just a tip to add to your tuneology.

nice one ;-)

yeah this one's HOT.

lovin' that piano
and those stringz
are PERFECT.

excellent work.
that arrangement had
an amazin' build-up too.

Much Respect from LA

Love the vibe here...The piano and strings and everything...The piano sounds like from one game or i dont know i heard it before....
Nice work dude has the i miss you vibe!!!
beat is in place
Rocky Production ! :)

i like this one a lot jokerface. sick as hell and never disappoints. bumps with a little bass line in the drum. never can have too much of that! well anyways nice work!

joker face this is one dope beat i liked it very much ....i would put some hard vocals on it ...i would collab the vocals with a dark ryme ..its hot my friend it really is

dope beat yeah hmn has sum dope stuff rite.but i like this its dark but stillcurrent and up 2 date.has it own thing goin naw mean.keep it up .peace 352ezy

I like. I like. wish there could be abit more change though

this joint is crazy def feeling this i could murda this track !!!!!! crazy swagg!!!

this beat is crazy man i could def swag wit it!!!!

first off my four year old is terrified of your pic. hahaha. but hes dancein to ya beat and thats all that matters right. tight track my dude you certainly have picked the perfect title for this beat. keep up the good work. PEACE.

it's my cousin kuttup and we both make beats and record music in the studio. so if u have a beat we can spit on, then we can record a part two of the previous track u heard and just bang it out.

yo this track is really smooth and have alot of emotion in it.

i think my lyrics are hot, checkout slash and burn on my page i'm the second rapper and if u like it we can do a colabo.

Ok I may have found a new producer on Looperman I can understand. Hot as track. Love the drums. No like i said I review a track to let an artist know what I think would make it better and the only other thing i would change is to put a hard ass bass drum in it. But maybe that is just the dirty south in me. Keep doing your thang man

phat beat mane, thiz sheit is off tha hook fam.. nice one n good show..

i'm feeling this one my friend and it really got me wanting to rap.

this track 10/10 i luv this very smooth, soft and lil dark at the same time luv this.

this is another one of those - with the right vocals - it would be a banger. maybe a harder hitting kick and bass thu.

Mmmhm!! You really do got something here. I love the claps when they come in and them against the beat. They tie this up into something very very nice. And the keys, too. Of course. The keys are the key magne!!! Nice work.

yo bro we have a similar style...dope beat homie.. hit me up for a collab