nice timing on your rap and the overall mix is really good. It's a loud track but the sounds are all sitting in their own sweet spots. The rap is nice and strong over the mix.
I hope you will continue developing your excellent rap style. You have great sense of timing. Over time perhaps you will experiment with developing various vocal colors, variety of expression, etc.
Always flaming hot work from you, you have mastered the craft of wordplay which now a day is lacking in hip hop, true hip hop artist and a awesome listen, Larry
Only constructive criticism is the flow sometimes. Namely where you say “it takes prac-tice”. I feel if you were to just say the word practice instead of drawing it out, although it would cause more space between the end of that line and the start of the next one, would make the bar sound fuller as a whole.
Other than that small detail, the rest of the best and lyrics sounds dope!!
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I hope you will continue developing your excellent rap style. You have great sense of timing. Over time perhaps you will experiment with developing various vocal colors, variety of expression, etc.
Regards - Dan
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definitely going over to SC to scope the full track!
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Like your flow...look me up.
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Maybe i ll use it ...
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its Also on my looperman page g
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Only constructive criticism is the flow sometimes. Namely where you say “it takes prac-tice”. I feel if you were to just say the word practice instead of drawing it out, although it would cause more space between the end of that line and the start of the next one, would make the bar sound fuller as a whole.
Other than that small detail, the rest of the best and lyrics sounds dope!!
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