FrozenStick

I always like to check out a track labelled 8 bit when I see it here, and this is a fun one! I think it could really be developed into something deeper, but I see it is for a game, so I understand the simplicity. Cool old style sounds for sure. Fun to hear!

FrozenStick
I like this one.
Well done.
Jamid

What kind of game is it? Sound good but must be some kind of time attack game because there is a lot of rush-feeling in the track.

Cool mate, it's good for games and a can also be used to produce a super cool track. Good composition!! :D

Good luck with your game :)

short but perfect
liked it
thanks
TJ

hey frozen u can hear that you are progressing listened to ya first tune in nov and well as they say rome wasnt bulit in a day , some of the elements may be a bit loud in places but listened to this in my cans and its got its own thing going on keep at it every track u write u will learn a new trick or three and this site is great for actual constructive critique and taking that back to the drawing board
writing music is a labour of love imo
u bare ya soul for the world to hear
peace :P

FrozenStick
Hello
Overall, it is good track to listen, the problem is a little over gained that why at top end it shows the distortion, which bring the track down.
Great job.
Jamid

Yeah too loud but this is nowadays...:-)

1.16: synth comes in, it's a big surprise...cool...

Creative track...

Danke

This track needs work man. A couple of things to pactice, mixing, structuring your track and music theory. The theory will help you out a lot. Good luck.

The Rythm is nice and the synths are well chosen but way too loud. Especially the synth in the last part of tghe track should be limited. A little more cariation would help as well. Anyway, a good production which needs some tweaking!

Excellent. One size fits all. Good material to work with. :)

I'm not a big fan of this sound... sounds like a lot of samples slapped together with a drum beat. The notes don't quite match up correctly either, and those wobbles don't really fit in well.

I like the main saw lead on its own though, lots of room for improvement and all. Keep up the work!

I find this.. Energetic! Wow, right off the bat it's just so uplifting with that melodic synth. Like a trance. I think this would work really well as an intro - the build up is great!
Oh.. And I love your profile pic :)

Lovely listen :D

Confusing lovelife? XD that's how I describe your lovelife in your track :)

about the track... nice transition but be easy with the wobbles at the end. There's still a big room for development on your track. I would gladly listen to your next track.

Regards,
ReonN

i it very much

I like the track has cool beat. reminds me of old video game from 80's-90's. cool track, good work.

Yeap. I like the point of Orlando. Turbulent! Anyway It has rythm, but i also think that you miss the key of bass. Now, you have nice intro but no good outro. You can work on that.

Hello there! This track has a good start. Intro is good, and works. However, around :27, once the lower brass comes in, it becomes overpowering to the drum pattern and the main lead. It is also severely off-key and the "wubs" do not sync with the 140 bpm. However, with simple corrections, this track could have absolute potential. Don't give up. Best of luck to you! :)

~GO

This indicates very turbulent love life.:)

Cheers_____Orlando

You must have a stormy love life :-). It is a nice start to a song but feels unfinished. Would like to hear the full version...

Hello FrozenStick
It is very peculiar and interesting.
Good job
Jamid

I like the chords that you used. Did you use a sidechain on the synth? but still, great work :)

It could be a stunning trailer...

Awesome synths (but no ambience here on my humble opinion)...actually, who cares what genre it is???

Good but short music...

O.K. Man. It's not as bad as you think. However, it can be better. If you long enough it work. You must belive in yourself.