Keen5003

i lulz it

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rubadub wub wub

nice song, you mind if i use it in one of my gaming videos?

nice bro

That was fracken awwwwwwwwwwwsome

Well, I don't really like it.
Nothing really fits and works with the beat and it sounds pretty messed up.
And you just took loops made by others...
Nah, there are definitely better tracks Out there.
But that's just my opinion.
-Timmy

great song

Good sound, and a really well put together track in general. I think you could have made more use of the strings which may have enhanced it (this may be compensated when you add the vocals.. cant wait for that version)and the ending needs tweaking, its a bit abrupt at the moment. a really good track though.

Best wishes,

Mark/Larry!

I always like to hear string ensembles in music, it fits your track nicely.. However, in my honest opinion some reverb in your string ensemble could've made it more realistic, sorry o:
Other than that, it is very pleasing to listen to! ^^

Lmfao

Wow good

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You described this pretty accurate. Short but amazing.

Great track ! Nice, heavy and catchy.

As to what it's missing two things pops into mind.
First of all adding some ambience in the background would make it more atmospheric.
Second of all you could put a melody on top of the drop.. For instance the one you've got going in the beginning. Just throwing out ideas here.

Otherwise great sound - Good job on mastering !

I`m working in Electro-House too, so here is my opinion:
The lead is a masterpiece! Really sounds great, the sound is good! BUT, the electro drop will sound better if you put a limiter in it or just turn down the volume and a little less cutoff and of course without the lead, but maybe just me...
Secondly when the kick is in the lead there is no groove (bassline) and it feels a little empty, but maybe I`m deaf (could be playing music all day lol :D).
In the end this track is a really good idea and you NOT too far from perfect!
Got very bad english, but I hope u understand me!
Cheeers! :)

the kick that begins your buildup at 0:15 is a beat too late. should be coming in right on the first beat of the 9th bar. Also with that sort of buildup people will be expecting a bassline and a kick drum to drop in at 0:30, not another drumless break. study dubstep track structures, listen to the pro's dubstep tracks, count out the beats and bars and where the drums come in, where the basses come in, etc. keep producing, your doing great for only being 13 years old.

Its really great . Good job Man.

muito bom sem palavras as sequencias estão na medida certa um belo trabalho parabéns

It was a good track but I agree with Larry/mark that the bass is too overpowering for a house tune. It's like you wanted to add some elements of Bro-step into the mix and it doesn't work. I do agree with you that simple can be good...less is more is the old saying.
Steve

Hi, from 3.50 the echo effect spoils it for me, but that may be just me. I would see if anyone else picks up on it before you take it out. Its still a good effort and well done.
Thanks,
Mark/Larry!

Its a really nice track, just a few spoilers, the heavy warp synth was a bit overbearing at times, the beat was a tad to loud in places, and the balance at the end just came adrift slightly, just my opinion and meant as constructive. Nicely put together overall and a good effort.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!