The drums and the other elements don’t sound like from the same location. You should glue everything with some reverb. There are some clicks (0:21 and 2:50). The arrangement seems very experimental. That’s partly interesting and entertaining, but I am missing definitely highlights. There is space for some higher tones. But that can also be a matter of taste. People who only make beats have specific opinions. The bass sounds very nice, but comes in too surprisingly. A fill could announce it. That’s what I think. It’s constructive criticism and shall help you with your next projects.
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