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The melody is relaxing, I like the sustain arp on the background, would love to hear more lofi from you keep it up :>

The vocals in this one is phenomenal, I agree with danke, you need to lower other it down, like the vocals and the synths, coz it's overshadowing other elements.

Good use of brass, I agree with BaoBou that this needs a little melodic elements, just add a synth fillers.

Classic wubs are always be my favorite.

Drop has a lot of potential though

Sad to hear that you couldn't save it.

Oh God! That drop is hella nasty.

Snare smacking me in the face, great work on the basses.

Drop has a lot of potential, some things to keep in mind.

You need a build-up so listeners can anticipate the drop.

Hi-hats and some earcandies so it doesn't sound empty.

Definitely worth finishing.

Machine Gun Bass at it's finest.

Reminds me of the good ol' brostep era, this drop got me reminiscing, I would like to hear the full track if it's done.

I like how you start off with a ambiance though it's a bit lengthy I would suggest to cut some parts out, love the @2:30 part that transition into a banger riddim drop @2:41 not to mention that double build-up you did quites work well overall good track.

The ambient intro is a good idea to start up a track and the piano has a chilling vibe.

The vocals is also good but it's clipping and a bit loud turn it down a db or so, also the reverb decay on the vocals are too high and it's making the track messy and muddy maybe tweak it down and eq it a little more.

Overall this track has a potential to be honest.

Oh God my neck!!!

Clean track, drop flow is out of this world, those transitions and fills are all on point.

Props on the switch at 3:58 this part break my neck specially here at 4:18.

Hope to hear more tracks from you great work.

Build-up needs a more heavy or reliant risers, I like how you focus a lot more on low end basses but it needs more mid bass to fill up some space though.

Great use of distortions to make it more nasty.

The transition between the breakdown and drop @0:22 is smooth,

drop has a nice flow, agree with VirginiaSlimm that the second breakdown could add more variations.

I think the only thing to point out here is the drop, tho I like how it sounds but it's too repetitive try to add bass or change the flow of the drop after a bar or so, to give this track more of a variation.

Great choice of piano chords and melody, the transition at 0:57 is pretty smooth.

And I heard that you're working on the build-up drums which is nice, I like how you reverse the lead at 1:37.

Though the intro needs more ambiances wildlife sfx or maybe a chatter would help a lot to fill some gaps.

And the leads are quite loud turn it down a bit.

The idea is there but the problem is the vocals does not sync, don't get me wrong I like the vocals a lot but you need to fit it with your tracks bpm.

I can see that on every upload you're improving.

It's more cleaner now than before, piano is fine now and I don't hear unwanted frequencies, great use of rainstorm ambiance on the background, also the plucks at 0:22 is mesmerizing.

The drop is close to becoming perfect, just layer the synths with a sidechained white noise, it will gives more body on the highs in the drop.

And now I think you need to change your build-up drums a bit coz all of the tracks I've heard from you got a same build-up drums make a variety, maybe put a percussions.

Also I noticed that you don't have a hi-hats and crashes just add some hat loops it will make your drums better.

That's all keep it up and just enjoy what you're doing.

A creative track you did here.

The intro transition are all on point, vocal chops give so much atmosphere in the track which is nice.

The anime samples are all good and you did a good job on that one, I like the predrop panning at 0:55/1:00 it gives more of a kinda exciting feels to the drop.

My suggestion here is:

At 1:45 is lacking a downlifter and ambiances which leads to empty spaces maybe add a subtle pads, also not a fan of the snare but it's optional that's only my opinion.

Good job on this you nailed the intro just right, now it's more sounding like Illenium, I like the entry of the pads at 0:26 it's uplifting.

My opinion now is:

Have a uplifter or just a mini riser for the transition on the build-up at 0:45 and remove the pads and the guitar at the build-up so it doesn't sound repetitive, and start introducing the vocal chops and the drop synth by automating it (filter it out).

And also the drop is lacking synths and the bass is overpowering it, just tweak it down a bit.

Lastly the mix I'm hearing unwanted frequencies cut some lows.

Old dubstep indeed with those reversed snares and screechy lead at the intro.

Brostep is such a great genre for me, I just hate how dubstep scene is now going through, same 1'2 riddim pattern almost on every track with a sustain mid bass in the background smh.

Anyways nice track this gives me a nostalgia.

Another thing, you can put a high pitch vocal chop on the drop.

And more mid basses to give the drop a solid punch, don't forget to pan some elements in the drop.

The transitions you've made are all good specially on the build-up, maybe put more risers, I kinda like the switch on the second drop.

The drop drums are loud though and it drowns the bass, you can also put an arp or maybe a skank on the drop to add more grooviness.

Very emotional piano, filtered drums is also a good fit, I like how you just stay with a slow beat and not overdoing it.

Ambiances are all on point, but some parts of the piano has a thick signals that cause a distorted sounds for example at 3:15.

You're actually improving ngl, atmosphere is amazing, same with the piano in the intro kinda brings more emotional vibe.

But illenium is quite guitar base (not piano) i guess, anyway keep it up.