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geez...
excellent work. I love the African vibe/tone at the begining of the track. The arrangement really exposes this issue. This is a sad song. Very sad. The track evokes emotion.
Sprinkling your vocal on top adds to the high emotional content.
Are you into Sinead? It kinda sounds like you emulate her a bit.
I think you would agree with some of her views:
http://www.sineadoconnor.com/music.htm

oh... I really love this intro.
This time the snare's mostly in the right speaker. I suggest you pan the snare center.
I really like your use of the back ground sound. Def unique!
I love it.

Vocal effects definite remind me of Parliment.
You may want to check the stereo paning the claps and kick drum seem to be mostly in the left speaker. Or did you do that panning on purpose?

Tell us a bit more on how you made this one. Did you sync an existing rap to this track?
I like the female vocal on this one a lot. Hope we hear more tracks from you soon!

The intro laugh could make this a classic track.
I like the saw type buzz line (it's almost like a bass line but not quite.) That stereo patch is ear candy.

The reverbs and the musical effect take this one up a bunch of notches. Could you translate the lyrics to English for us?

yeah! great rap! too cool with a germany flavor!
I'd like to hear the drum track turned up about 2 notches. I'd like to hear the vocals down just a notch.
I can't wait to hear more from YOU!

Sounds good. Very melodic. I could see rapper's being able to use this track.

Too cool that you strung this together using only samples. Tell me about your musical training!

The talent and dedication it takes to get to the level of playing you are at DESERVES some serious recognition. I listened to a decent amount of Zappa & I hear just a bit of his influence on this piece. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent & skills.

You do have a nice sense of melody... something that I sometimes lack! Tell us about the guitars you use.

Thanks for the post Rick... I'll take it home & throw a few leads on it. :)

Excellent production. where did you record this?
Tasty guitar tone especially the riff.
And, the lyrics are descriptive, historic, and catchy.
To quote Dewey Finn: "it's a perfect rock song!"
Go forth... tour the world & make tons of money!

Kinda reminded me of a Snow Patrol tune. You've got an excellent voice with lots of character which fits this style nicely. This track sounds like it should be on the radio.

The guitar track kicks butt!
I'd love to put you in the studio with a real drummer. You'd do some serious damage!

I like the saw type/distorted type bass line & mostly agree with Coney!

This a nicely produced rock song. i really like the drum sound. It was recorded well. I dig the guitar tones especially that solos. The leads have a smoke'n vibe!

I like the track description. Great treatment of the acapella.
The guitar wasn't terrible. It might just need to be warmed tone-wise. This is a very creative and entertaining track!
Good job!

I like this better than some of the Jan Hammer stuff. Smooth track. great drum track here, too.
Tell us more about HOW you put this together. What synth's did you use?

Tell your sis to breath now... she did great!
I'd lower the vocals overall to let the track cut through. What I really love about this track is the musical transitions. It's almost like getting 3 songs in one. Each section is entertaining, too!

drop-jawed...
nice tight mix & great recording production.
Almost too fast for me. Just LISTENING to this raised my heart rate. I immediately downloaded the album.
THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS AMAZING music!!!

hee hee hee... great vocal hook! Great idea for a tune.
a buzy track & def worth the listen!!!

i didn't hear a drum machine.
The playing is awesome. The recording sucks. I suggest you look at a few posts on guitar recording techniques. Your playing deserves better recordings IMO.

The guitar part has great energy. Seemed odd to end the track on a guitar solo. This is spectacular guitar work. Color me impressed!

You THINK you did well on the vocal? LOL!
Geez child, you're perfect. great vocals and you can arrange/play.