Individually the music and the vocals are cool, but it sounds like two separate tracks. It sounds out of time. The instrumental section in the middle is great. The subtle strings are awesome.
HHello HeathAlexander, I would like to thank you for your constructive criticism. You're right. The vocal line is not on point with the music. Unfortunately, the reason is that all the music was put under the vocal track afterwards. This is extremely difficult with some vocal tracks because both the singer and the composer, arranger and producer act at their own pace. Unfortunately, this difficulty is clearly heard on this track. However, I think that you can still see that both players are passionate about the matter. In a life situation there would be no timing fluctuations or "parallel worlds". Even if the singer would have sung to the composition afterwards, there would probably have been no timing problems.
a fantastic song, music and an incredibly out of place vocal on it ... of course good tone but I don't think it feels the music... and there is no explosion of the vocals...a huge chorus or stg like that...hope it didn't hurt...
thanks for your constructive comment! I guess you are right! The song will be more interesting with a chorus - perhaps with some strings or an other instrument in connection with the vocal line.
i love the muzic. it almost has a rather meditational feel to start, and then it reminds me of something from Miami Vice, the original series with the cute...sorry, back to the muzic...
the muzic rocks. i'd love to hear it as an instrumental.
This a very soulfull song, i love the swayings effects, it has an memorizing effect for the brain. Then somewhere in the middle the bass gets deeper with the same effects. The vocals are very used well. Great job.
great music and arrangement - i'll take a second just to say the drum arrangements in particular are crazy beautiful - that's meticulous and immaculate, man - and of course that goes for everything - fav
Commented on Show me the way by Rockman
Individually the music and the vocals are cool, but it sounds like two separate tracks. It sounds out of time. The instrumental section in the middle is great. The subtle strings are awesome.
Commented on Nothing Compares - Instrumental by Rockman
not bad man
Commented on Right from the start by Rockman
a fantastic song, music and an incredibly out of place vocal on it ... of course good tone but I don't think it feels the music... and there is no explosion of the vocals...a huge chorus or stg like that...hope it didn't hurt...
handshake, Danke
Commented on Fighting for the Loners by Rockman
the voice is like Chris Cornell (rip)...very cool...the music is too but a bit "too much" under the singing, if you know what I mean...
handshake, Danke
Commented on Shallow Ground by Rockman
great progressivity...cool track...
handshake, Danke
Commented on Planet Earth by Rockman
Interesting setting the vocalist vocals off beat in this tune; I really liked your musical composition. fresh and interesting.
Great Job
D
Commented on WhenAllTheMaterialIsGoneFeatThyroidFeatPEdwards by Rockman
beautiful arrangement + perfs = excellent collab!!
Commented on Didn t heard me feat P Edwards by Rockman
It's pretty lonnnnng though :-)
Commented on Didn t heard me feat P Edwards by Rockman
I think this could be mixed a tad bit better (not that I'm a mix/master guru).
I like the "springy" effect on the overall track.
I really like the muzic here. It's lively and possesses good vibes!!!!
Commented on He s there feat P Edwards by Rockman
Hey there Rockman, I really like that muzic. I can imagine it as an action movie theme song of some sort. Nice job.
Commented on Move your car feat P Edwards by Rockman
Nice job!
Commented on Follow your heart feat Patricia Edwards by Rockman
This could be in a movie...
Love the contrast in the muzic and vocals...a mashup that doesn't seem like a mixup!
Good job Mr. Rockman!
Commented on Feeling good by Rockman
Can I tell you that I LOVEEEEEEEEEE that muzic, its make me feel good :-)
Commented on How many times feat P Edwards by Rockman
Nice Track
Commented on Pop to the universe by Rockman
Nice instrumental..!
RGDS
SERGEJ
Commented on WassUp by Rockman
Good track,anything with Patricia is awesome and you did a great job.
Very good!
Allen
Commented on Baby will you play for me by Rockman
that muzic sounds like a soundtrack for some kind of detective or good guys chasin bad guys movie. lots of suspense there. nice.
Commented on Take a listen by Rockman
Very good song,i love the bass and the guitar.
Good work!
Commented on My heart by Rockman
keep up the good work !!!!
Commented on Think My Baby Left Me by Rockman
its still amazing to me how many like this pella...
your muzic is very relaxing.
Commented on GiveItUp by Rockman
i love the muzic. it almost has a rather meditational feel to start, and then it reminds me of something from Miami Vice, the original series with the cute...sorry, back to the muzic...
the muzic rocks. i'd love to hear it as an instrumental.
Commented on GiveItUp by Rockman
This a very soulfull song, i love the swayings effects, it has an memorizing effect for the brain. Then somewhere in the middle the bass gets deeper with the same effects. The vocals are very used well. Great job.
Commented on Think My Baby Left Me by Rockman
great music and arrangement - i'll take a second just to say the drum arrangements in particular are crazy beautiful - that's meticulous and immaculate, man - and of course that goes for everything - fav
Commented on Easy going by Rockman
Like the title says it's a easy listen track!!! great track man Keep it up :)
Commented on Movie track by Rockman
very beautiful "deep-blue-submarine-under-water" sound ...
would be perfect for a documentary about the ocean I think!
very enjoyable and relaxing ...
eigentlich pure meditationsmusik, und das hat in der hier prsentierten form natrlich einen hohen qualittsfaktor ... groartige arbeit!!
peace, rei