Vocals are strong. I'm not sure the music do them justice. I wish I had the stems so I could play around and see if I could do something with them. I guess the vocals just have more soul than the music does for me.
I can't see anything wrong with this. The vocals are da bomb, to begin with. Just fantastic. And then the music, really it's pretty darn near perfect as the setting for the vocals. Deeelightful stuff. I just loved it from beginning to end. Great work!
Very catchy bass line here. This would have sounded as good as an instrumental, with some little tweeks here and there as Spudsy has mentioned. Definately has potential! Nice work here anyways!
thanks for your feedback smallpaul its much appreciated,its the tweeks to perfection which i need to learn to advance the quality,im trying as much as pos to learn from youtube vids as i only know basics so far except for a few things like reversing a sample by bouncing in place and tasks alike. i will reach perfection in good time im sure i know ive just got to keep trying and learning... thanks :)
The opening was almost identical to a tune I used to play back in the 90's, although I can't remember the name of it, so this brought back a few memories.
In fact, if I heard this in an 'old skool' mix, I wouldn't bat an eyelid.
hey mildperil thanks for your comments on the track,glad you liked it. i bet my life i probably know the track your mentioning as i was raised in the 80's and have always loved my music since i can remember...since you had to press record and play at the same time to record on casette from some dodgy pirate radio station lol...thanks buddy
the bass line is fine for the genre (if your going for the garage type deep house vibe) although the drums seem to have a very strange structure. Parts dropping in and out at will. One moment you have the hats then 16 later they are out then 16 later they are back in? its very jarring and is causing the track to not flow correctly. Also makes the whole track sound like its been made with building blocks. Try making another copy of the bass in a higher octave, and put it after the second break down, low in the mix with some ping pong delay and reverb to ad an extra layer.
Drum roles, white noise risers and falls, FX... all these things are your friend in making the transitions between parts less stale.
thanks for the constructive criticism spudsy its exactly what i am looking for,i dont have a real deal studio set up yet just a mac and speaker to jack lead,vocals are very limited to find in beat anywhere for free and im no master at mixing down... i thought the parts that drop in and out were not so random like you said 16 in and 16 out but hey im no pro and this is my first attempt since having the mac,im not used to most of the terminology yet ether ....ill try the bass in higher octave too ....if you can pass on any hints or tips for mastering in logic it will be much appreciated... thanks
hi looper friend thanx for your great comments of my track! and thanx loads for adding it as one of your favs. Ill make it downloadable for you too.(thanx...
hey thanx agaian there looper friend for the great comments! Makes me feel rather pleased with meself. Thanx a hell of a lot for noticing an letting know so. Thanx!
Hi there looper friend! Thanx for the great comments as they, 'cheer me up'. To know my tracks can make people feel good is such a buzz for me. Thanx alot! :-)
... Btw ... Agree with Hirogenium concerning that kind of english horn or something sound playing it's totally own strokes... But again .. I like it eventhough somehow anyways.. Cause it's a kind of naughty and funny..
Hi again lol! Its the kinda out of key high noted sound you mean is it? Im gonna take the sound out and put the new improved bk up. Do you think i should take it out or just change the sound? thank you for your appreciated advice!
Did You send them to my mail dear ? Listened to Your so nice music again and liked it even more.. It was via the song advertisement here on the right ..
hi! Been real busy of late (thankfully) but i haven't forgot you and will have them tracks for you v soon as im working at it as i type,Just hope you can work with one of them. Thanx for the review!
Thanx for the great review of my track looper friend! Glad that you could get into the track i made its a mission accomplished for me as i wanted this track to show my warmer side. Thanx for listening looper friend!
hey looper friend! Thanx for the positive review of my track! As with the genre im never realy 100% sure and normally ask friends what they think. thanx looper buddy!
Hey, this song could be a synth pop hit, I strongly recommend to remove the disharmonic sound parts and give it an more overall structure. Anyway, good work.
Hi there looper friend! Thanx for the positive and constructive comments on the track that i made. I too be-leave that this track has great potential but i wouldn't know how where or if about taking it to the next level to mix it down etc. Have you any recommendations of what to do? Thanx for the inspiration looper buddy!
Commented on Feeling sexual by angler234
your medley is very sexual as ur talent keep going I wanna play this on piano hopefully soon thanks
Commented on By myself by angler234
work of art - amazing work
sincere
-CAP
Commented on By myself by angler234
Vocals are strong. I'm not sure the music do them justice. I wish I had the stems so I could play around and see if I could do something with them. I guess the vocals just have more soul than the music does for me.
Commented on By myself by angler234
Dope! Like that Mobi vibe
Commented on Feeling sexual by angler234
I can't see anything wrong with this. The vocals are da bomb, to begin with. Just fantastic. And then the music, really it's pretty darn near perfect as the setting for the vocals. Deeelightful stuff. I just loved it from beginning to end. Great work!
Commented on Beautiful by angler234
I agree with @PRODUCERFIWURK XD
Commented on Cant beat me by angler234
Im going to make a remix with this. This. Is. So. Niceeeee.
Commented on Falling by angler234
Very catchy bass line here. This would have sounded as good as an instrumental, with some little tweeks here and there as Spudsy has mentioned. Definately has potential! Nice work here anyways!
Commented on Falling by angler234
The opening was almost identical to a tune I used to play back in the 90's, although I can't remember the name of it, so this brought back a few memories.
In fact, if I heard this in an 'old skool' mix, I wouldn't bat an eyelid.
Thanks for sharing.
Commented on Falling by angler234
the bass line is fine for the genre (if your going for the garage type deep house vibe) although the drums seem to have a very strange structure. Parts dropping in and out at will. One moment you have the hats then 16 later they are out then 16 later they are back in? its very jarring and is causing the track to not flow correctly. Also makes the whole track sound like its been made with building blocks. Try making another copy of the bass in a higher octave, and put it after the second break down, low in the mix with some ping pong delay and reverb to ad an extra layer.
Drum roles, white noise risers and falls, FX... all these things are your friend in making the transitions between parts less stale.
Thanks for sharing
Commented on Cant take it any more baby by angler234
Nicely done man. It kind of has an MGMT feel to it or maybe Ghostland? Anywho, I dig it!
Commented on Dubby by angler234
ANother great tracj form you, my friend, and most enjoyable.
Faved
John
Commented on Cant take it any more baby by angler234
Also faved and downloaded :-)
John
Commented on Dont know anymore by angler234
Got it downloaded. Thanks :-)
John
Commented on Dont know anymore by angler234
Great track. Well composed and well produced. Loving the happy atmosphere on this one.
Faved and downloaded (dman, can't download)
John
Commented on Dont know anymore by angler234
sounds crazy..........
Commented on Cant take it any more baby by angler234
Wow, another great track. You do some very, very good work.
You got some definite talent, my friend, I'll be back to check out more.
John
Commented on Dont know anymore by angler234
hey really liked this tune is good fun bit of feel good music cheered me up...nice one!
Commented on Just now - by angler234
Nice song I like.
Commented on Dont know anymore by angler234
This inspires visions of some sort of strange machine that has to warm up before it gets going! Cool tune!
Commented on Just now - by angler234
... Btw ... Agree with Hirogenium concerning that kind of english horn or something sound playing it's totally own strokes... But again .. I like it eventhough somehow anyways.. Cause it's a kind of naughty and funny..
Commented on Just now - by angler234
Did You send them to my mail dear ? Listened to Your so nice music again and liked it even more.. It was via the song advertisement here on the right ..
Commented on Dont know anymore by angler234
such a good-natured vibe - a bemused yet critical eye - very warm and kinetic - much admire the 'personality' of this track
Commented on Just now - by angler234
that tight man like it but I dont think its pop sound more like electro trance that good how (mix)you did the vocals too
Commented on Just now - by angler234
Hey, this song could be a synth pop hit, I strongly recommend to remove the disharmonic sound parts and give it an more overall structure. Anyway, good work.
cheers