@ImprovewithError, I like your loops and have used them many times. This is the first time I've come across one of your tracks and it is a fine track. I enjoyed my listen except these heirloom ears had a little trouble picking out your vocals (which were worth picking out, I might add). As many genres as there are on here I, too, find it hard to select one that describes it besides "weird" which only diehards wanna check out. vigwig (vic)
I think you should make your voice stand out more. I like the droning going on from the synth but I feel sometimes it washes itself out a little. Overall this is already epic and can only get better
Awesome song, love it. I'm blown away by the fact that you also play all the instruments.
Only thing I would like more of is to hear your voice cutting through the mix, you've got a great voice with a real nice tone, and feel that it should be more prominent in the song.
great ambience and vibe Kyle , a nice pause in this big list of banging tracks. Love the sound f the toms, they sound very compact and with lots of presence ! Also, the fact you sing, it's always a plus and i give respect to that. Keep em coming big guy !
first off....the tracks needs more high end...and adjust the volume for the vocal..it's too upfront ...with better mixing and mastering...the track will bang mate
Nice one Kyle! Great all around effort here. I like the minimal aspect of the track and how you build on it. All instruments are clean and well played. But your vocals are the main ingredient and are what really delivers the knockout punch. This is one of those tracks that grabs your heart and squeezes the emotion out of you. That's the power of vocals and the difference they can make. I did notice a bit of background noise that I think could be improved with some EQ adjustment. There at the very end when the music cuts you can really hear it. That's prevalent throughout and muddying the track up. If you could fix that I think you would notice some improved clarity. Irrespective, I think you knocked this one out of the park man. Really diggin it !
Hey thanks for listening to the track, I appreciate your compliments. I couldn't quite get the EQ just right on this one, seemed like the more I tried to fix it the worse that it got. I will probably give it another try in the future after I have taken a long break from hearing the track. Anyway, thanks again.
Wow Kyle, The improvement is amazing. you are getting better and better each track you produce. I like the chorus and your vocals on this one. A dramatic yet clear song that I am still playing back in my head after listening to it which is a really good sign of a hit. Steve
Hey Steve, thanks I appreciate your compliments. I have been really trying get my songs to sound better by spending more time on them and giving them time to sit before I upload them that way I can get a fresh ear on them. Thanks again!!
This is outstanding...truly but really, one of the best rock track here...the mood is incredible the voice and the melodies are ethereal...the groovy is sweeping... In the first 2 minutes I was speechless, I just sat with my mouth and wondered, what the hell is happening? True music inside those hip hop and rap avalanches...
Danke thanks for the compliments I really appreciate them. I have been trying to push myself to make better music and create songs that I would really like to listen to. Anyway thanks for the listen, fav, comment, and download, its always nice to hear from you.
This one is radio ready Kyle..lyrics & vocal are first class & you did a really nice job on the recording & production...nice warm acoustic sound...just an all round great bit of work....Ed
Hey Ed, thanks for listening, I have been trying to find some time to record again, I am finding a little bit so hopefully I can get another couple of songs finished. Thanks again for the listen and the comments.
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
Nice rock player. Very creative production. What you doing lately? PEACE. T576 OUT.
Commented on Alive by ImproveWithError
Kool country track
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
@ImprovewithError, I like your loops and have used them many times. This is the first time I've come across one of your tracks and it is a fine track. I enjoyed my listen except these heirloom ears had a little trouble picking out your vocals (which were worth picking out, I might add). As many genres as there are on here I, too, find it hard to select one that describes it besides "weird" which only diehards wanna check out.
vigwig (vic)
Commented on The Whole World by ImproveWithError
Really good.. but the vocals should be louder.
(Y)
Commented on The Whole World by ImproveWithError
I think you should make your voice stand out more. I like the droning going on from the synth but I feel sometimes it washes itself out a little. Overall this is already epic and can only get better
Commented on The Whole World by ImproveWithError
I liked the drum track. For me, that kept the song strong.
Commented on The Whole World by ImproveWithError
Awesome song, love it. I'm blown away by the fact that you also play all the instruments.
Only thing I would like more of is to hear your voice cutting through the mix, you've got a great voice with a real nice tone, and feel that it should be more prominent in the song.
Other than that, thanks for sharing :)
Commented on The Whole World by ImproveWithError
incredible hit single :-)
but really, you created an outstanding song for every pop chart...(damon is right)
only 1 thing: you should change the hihat for cymbals to the chorus (from 0.07 and later) gives more power and groovy for that part...
standing ovation, Danke
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
great ambience and vibe Kyle , a nice pause in this big list of banging tracks. Love the sound f the toms, they sound very compact and with lots of presence !
Also, the fact you sing, it's always a plus and i give respect to that.
Keep em coming big guy !
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
ok SO I did make a melodic remix with background stuff! Please if you have the time, will you go check it out! comment what you think of the other music as well
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VahPYfZPrkY&feature=youtu.be
I really liked it, I hope you don't mind me using it though!
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
first off....the tracks needs more high end...and adjust the volume for the vocal..it's too upfront ...with better mixing and mastering...the track will bang mate
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
Great vocals. The track itself has commercial potential, just needs better mixing and mastering to bring out the brightness imo.
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
You should send me the stems! Id love to try and mix it :) You can keep the effects! I like your voice, it's nice to hear it again haha
Brado
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
Good melodies and very emotional. Need better mastering
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
Nice one Kyle! Great all around effort here. I like the minimal aspect of the track and how you build on it. All instruments are clean and well played. But your vocals are the main ingredient and are what really delivers the knockout punch. This is one of those tracks that grabs your heart and squeezes the emotion out of you. That's the power of vocals and the difference they can make. I did notice a bit of background noise that I think could be improved with some EQ adjustment. There at the very end when the music cuts you can really hear it. That's prevalent throughout and muddying the track up. If you could fix that I think you would notice some improved clarity. Irrespective, I think you knocked this one out of the park man. Really diggin it !
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
Nice concept. But you need to improve on your mixing and mastering skills.
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
A huge step up from the last time I heard you.
Really good song. Well written, well performed and just overall more rounded.
Well played, quite literally. And thanks for sharing :)
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
Wow Kyle, The improvement is amazing. you are getting better and better each track you produce. I like the chorus and your vocals on this one. A dramatic yet clear song that I am still playing back in my head after listening to it which is a really good sign of a hit.
Steve
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
Hi!
Nice track! Cool guitarplay as ever and man, you have nice vocal! Wonder how it sounds when you release a bit more (more roar, less technique :D).
Regards, traz
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
Well well well, that's very nice, nice chords, nice progression, I like your singing too. Mixing and mastering is on point. Great ending.
Keep it up!
Peace.
Commented on I Breathe by ImproveWithError
Kyle!
Holy Gold God!
This is outstanding...truly but really, one of the best rock track here...the mood is incredible the voice and the melodies are ethereal...the groovy is sweeping...
In the first 2 minutes I was speechless, I just sat with my mouth and wondered, what the hell is happening?
True music inside those hip hop and rap avalanches...
thanx for the upload, fav, dl, hats off, Danke
Commented on Get On Back by ImproveWithError
Nice song man! You have a quality voice and nice guitar skills. Produce more!
Ronabo
Commented on Get On Back by ImproveWithError
Love the acoustic vibe! You should make an ep
Commented on Get On Back by ImproveWithError
Would agree with Ed on everything...truly awesome tune with great vocals!
Compliments_____Orlando
Commented on Get On Back by ImproveWithError
This one is radio ready Kyle..lyrics & vocal are first class & you did a really nice job on the recording & production...nice warm acoustic sound...just an all round great bit of work....Ed