Than, I must say, I love this attempt very much, but my friend, hip hop is also not my best, so I really don't have useless opinions...my only idea is to use a bass line with live bass guitar or it's not, than bass synth...there is no 'deep' in the song... :-)
There are sites to download free plugins like (VST4free...)
Commented on National Uplifting Melody by Spivkurl
https://www.looperman.com/users/tracks/874779 Hope u like it...
Commented on Hammer by Danke
Hello, danke
here i try to do something with this loop
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/146581
nd man im not good in this tye of stuff .. so plz guide me also .. that how could i make this track more good :-)