This appears to be a nice song. I like that you repeated the lyrics more than once, it gives a producer more flexibility. The recording is also relatively clean for a track that wasn't professionally recorded.
One thing that need work is the tempo. It's about 117 bpm, however, you are going offbeat a bit at times. In addition to this, some of the notes are off key. After listening and analyzing the song, you seem to be singing mostly in the key of C major.
I mention these two issues with the recording so that hopefully they improve in future recordings. The unstable tempo can be a "turnoff" to a producer that might not want to work harder on a free acapella. Same goes for singing in key. I thing that recording with a metronome and maybe a loop of a chord progression can help with both of these issues.
The recording is still better than many. I'd just like less work in fixing a recording, so that I can work more on composing! I hope my feedback doesn't seem harsh or rude, just shedding knowledge for improvement! I'm currently working on a track and hope to finish it sometime soon!
Decided I'd produce something with your vocals, which were great since I didn't have to do much editing. I like the vibes I get from your acapella. Hope I get to work with your stuff more in the near future.
Thanks for working with my acapella! I tend to recommend keeping the vocal tempo near the original. The vocals are rather unnatural this way and I'm guessing the listener might get irritated waiting for the words to come out. Also mixing could use some more work, the background is drowning under the vocals. I like the beat and the details of the background, for what I can hear.
Commented on Alexy Large - She Hates Love by AlexyLarge
Here is a link to my remix:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/172511
Commented on Alexy Large - She Hates Love by AlexyLarge
I like this! I'll see if I can make something with it in the near future. Also for anyone reading, this recording fits into the key of G min/A# Maj.
Commented on Keys In Tokyo Vocal Stems 128 Bpm E Major by paaschefredrik
Used this in a remix:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/168994
Commented on Stay Acapella by FarishaMusic
Made an EDM track with this vocal track
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162062
Commented on Forgetting You by zoielou
This appears to be a nice song. I like that you repeated the lyrics more than once, it gives a producer more flexibility. The recording is also relatively clean for a track that wasn't professionally recorded.
One thing that need work is the tempo. It's about 117 bpm, however, you are going offbeat a bit at times. In addition to this, some of the notes are off key. After listening and analyzing the song, you seem to be singing mostly in the key of C major.
I mention these two issues with the recording so that hopefully they improve in future recordings. The unstable tempo can be a "turnoff" to a producer that might not want to work harder on a free acapella. Same goes for singing in key. I thing that recording with a metronome and maybe a loop of a chord progression can help with both of these issues.
The recording is still better than many. I'd just like less work in fixing a recording, so that I can work more on composing! I hope my feedback doesn't seem harsh or rude, just shedding knowledge for improvement! I'm currently working on a track and hope to finish it sometime soon!
Commented on Happy Happy Merry Merry by JacVanBee
Interesting...I need all Christmas albums to be like this.
Commented on Go on - Acapella by ShAiDawn
Had some free time and made a track with your vocals. Thanks! https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/150233
Commented on Go on - Acapella by ShAiDawn
Wow, this sounds great!
Commented on Change by chyms
I used a snippet of this in a short piano melody I made.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/146287
Commented on Sombre sample by TaraToxic
Thanks for the upload!
Commented on New World by RomyHarmony
Decided I'd produce something with your vocals, which were great since I didn't have to do much editing. I like the vibes I get from your acapella. Hope I get to work with your stuff more in the near future.
https://soundcloud.com/adrianmusick/romyharmony-new-world