BigAl808

I'm no expert but hey! it sounds quite good to me in earphones:)

That's Brother Ali from rhyme Sayers records
Its a dope beat

Love this track, Cuz! You snapping off. MUST be in the blood!

First things first. I haven't seen Captain Caveman in so long. Great avatar. Now for the track. Real nice. Not over done. just enough to keep it interesting. Upbeat music. I like it a lot. It's got a real nice flavor to it. You did a great job. CAPTAAAAAAAAIN CAAAAVE MAN! Love it.

this is real hot man, i love the guitar sound, its fuckin nice
peace
mouko

check out my last uploaded song, a reaggeton one

real nice!! u need to put your daughter into a nice quality studio to record some shit man, real good
peace
mouko

Hi there BigAl808,
I don't listen to much Rap or Hip Hop as it is not my favorite type of music. My daughter loves it tho! Your family song here was good though and I did liked it. Rap songs are usually so long that I could never remember the words to any of them.

They all tell a story whether a real life story or made up, they are unique...and yours was one of them.
I see you use an Korg M-3. I am thinking about upgrading as I have the Korg Karma now.
Thanks for sharing your song here.
Randy

real nice work, beat and voice work real good together, it needs mastering man, but can be real good
peace
mouko

This is tight!
I dig hearing renditions of this sample.. I did it myself, least I thinks its the same keys, can't tell anymore.
Check it - ROB, STEAL, CHEAT EVERYDAY
Shogun

this is a good track.
What I like most is that this girl can actually rap.
She ain't yellin or fuckin cursin or over stressin her gangsta.
after that male interlude or whatever, she needs to reenter, I think its a little short, but the beat is tight and could easily be extended, I meen up to you though.
Peace

yaaa!! you droping that funky old school rythms

this is the kind of music that plays when i walk.
o yeagh!!!

i dig the track...

thats one sick beat

tracks like this just may turn me into an M.C.

:)

Very powerful with it's roots drinking the deep cool waters of emancipation........this works on so many levels...but above all it just grips you...you can't do better than that in this medium......cheers planet

Hey mate..welcome to the loop!.....this is very funky..it's hanging out for a bass line....but exists fine just by it's sweet self......cheers planet

Hey i Started a group called 7 Points !!!! and ive been listing to some of ur tracks and i gotta say i fuckin love ur style and was woundering if i could use some of ur work and write lyrics to them and make my demo cd with it. get back at me....

I'm feelin' the vibe of this track. This is that 'kickin' it in the summertime" type groove. Funky!!! Agent 907...Peace!!!

yeah i totally could understand what u r going trough with this song man, Nice real nice song!! a feeling on a simple melody

peace
mouko

I can hear the regret and loss in that loop. Solid track, great atmosphere.

LOL i know exatley why its back to church
awesome beat brah this would make a great cd intro

Man where did you get that vocal sample?? Its awsome...Cant wait to hear the full track...Get it done!!!!!! Sick beat too!!

nice job man! i felt in a jackie chan movie lol

i like it

peace
mouko

what is wrong with this dude?? is he dope??

its nice man, i like the guitar a lot u should add some hi hats to it.

peace
mouko

it sounds kinda breakbeat, sounds good man
peace
mouko

it's cry baby in the beginning and it needs some bass to make the rhythem guitar stand out the beat is good with the drums if somebodies rhyming but other wise the only thing thats best is the scratching at the end

keep up the good work

I would use the beat but it ain't mines

I would use it but I ain't make it