YungWillCPR

Nice track, YungWillCPR. I like your flow and hook. If I had to critique I would recommend lowering the hook into a deeper pitch instead of a higher one. Other than that I find this a fun track to listen to. Keep going!

- VicaMOOR

Enjoying this very much, and it helps me realize that you probably have some indication of what I mentioned in my reply to your comment on my song. This makes me happy! Your song also reminds me of my recent participation in a city council meeting... before the meeting, they had everyone stand and repeat the pledge of allegiance. My wife and I were the only ones in the room who did not recite it. It is thoroughly offensive to me to pledge allegiance to a god I do not believe in, and who has no place in politics... not to mention pledging allegiance to a government which does not hold the well being of it's citizens as dear. They do not deserve our allegiance any more. Thank you for sharing this inspiring song! I like it a lot! Fave and DL!

life as it is... not as it should be...

This is a fire track! I'm all about the message. My only critique is that you play with your EQ settings to reduce the amount of "pressure" in the track (the thudding, sub/kick action - unless of course that's the effect you were going for) and your panning and stacking to make the hook pop.

Other than that, keep it up!

dope as bro!!!!

Tight!

Dope beat!! clean production...let them haters hate...just keep doin you...you got talent...just keep puttin in the work.

Peace !!

Jody

Tuff Beat !! Dig your flow !!...But the Kik sounds funny..

good work tho

Jody

Sounds great.
Really nice job on the vocals, you got a thing for those ;)
The drum sounds a little weird to me though, maybe a little too much of a distortion for me. Possibly you could add in some low end for the drum

thanks for sharing and I will keep an eye out for new tracks

Cool track saying a lot, good bounce...

Enjoy it...

Sounds good bro. Check me out and let's see if we can collab or somethin.

Tight track YungWillCPR! That beat is dope and your flows are sick. A head nodder for sure. The mix sounds pretty good too. This one's a Fav. Nice work.

I always like to home in on tracks that didn't get much attention first time round, Nine times out of ten i can't figure out why they didn't and yep, this is one of those times.
This track is f***ng excellent. Your vocal skills are excellent. Your style of vocal reminds me of tricky from massive attack in this tune.
The mixdown is brilliant, the score is well written and it's incredibly professional sounding from start to finish.
Really enjoyed this track, i'm downloading it and i'm hoping you've uploaded some acapellas now as i want to use your voice.
Cheers for sharing.
FR

Excellent work again! Keep them coming!

Compliments_____Orlando

I like the lyrics and the vocals.
I admire your creativity and skills. :)
I like how you say: "It was written in the sky...." the whole chorus...I like the rhythm and I did enjoyed your song.
Good luck, Will.

Oxy

mighty impressed...your accent really sounds sick...you ride the beat like a bike my friend...lyrics, on the money..

You certainly know how to rap my friend. The lyrics are good, the pace is relentless and i have to respect the amount of time it must take to write four minutes worth of lyrics.
The back beat is good with a good mixture of instruments.
The piano and violin compliment each other very well and the big bass drum gives it that extra oomph!!!
I can't pick fault with this so it's 2 thumbs up from me.
FR

I like it! Has a real dirty southern feel to it, good job!

Nice job on the words and vocal deivery YungWill...its a nice smooth mix and I like the piano...Please take it as constructively intended...but I found the music mix got quite repetative after the first minute or two...It stays in an A minor key all the way through....I think you would really kick it up a notch by just doing a couple of key changes...or maybe a little progression like Am-C-G-Am would work a treat and you wouldn`t even have to change the vocal...anyway...a big well done to you...melodic hip hop raises the bar....keep on doing it.....Ed

not an experT in such genres buT beyond anything impressive heartY exedcution is notable & sensible . nice to meet U again tallented YungWillCPR .regards___Behnam

Yeah, I just fumbled that comment. That is the downside of editing while typing, LOL. What I meant to say in the line I flubbed is: "The distinctiveness of your voice, coupled with the way you use it,makes for a very distinctive style that sets you apart from the rest."

So, strike out that "You've got a very" portion.

Love & Light!

I may not like some of the lyrics, but I CANNOT deny you SLAYED this track! Awesome production. You've got a very The distinctiveness of your voice, coupled with the way you use it,makes for a very distinctive style that sets you apart from the rest. I could definitely see this track being offered on iTunes. It's just THAT good! Well done!

Love & Light,

Mykael

I love this track...
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Respect!

Dope track YungWillCPR! That's a ill beat and you laid down some sick flows. The mix sounds good too. It's a Fav. Nice work.

This is solid man. First time hearing that type of accent on a track like this. Worked really well. Unique flow.

Nice production..dig your flow...good work fam

Jody