This is pretty cool! Will you put some drums etc on it? I could also mix and master it a little bit. And do the screams, when you tell me where they should be! Pretty electronic tough, but its cool!
I put in some screams with my boy Infinex... And some makeshift drums, but those were just for scratch track, Still waiting for someone to do the drums and add the guitars.. new version here http://soundcloud.com/aiden-arrows/wishes-unfinished
Nice songs. I agree with the comment from ImpendingDoom about the lyrics. Regarding the music part... I think the drums could be a bit more "definite" (I am not sure if you want to make them more "punchy" or more "subtle" but currently they are a bit too in-between, IMHO). And I am not 100% sure about the ending solo, maybe you could try to use some of the good loops you can find 'round here ;-) But again, nice song. Domenico
yea.. agreed on the drums.. but I had to make do with what I have, and I only have one microphone to mic all of Johns drum kit lol.. so it was what it was. And yup.. that's Jeremy for you. He never plays anything in the right key's when he solo's. That's pretty much why I'm starting my band over from scratch. He just likes to try and show off and play his guitar behind his head and pick up "girls" instead of practicing or learning the right licks
nice guitar at the start. pretty complex sounding, opening vocals, (song name) gives a nice point of what the song's about and the message becomes more clear obviously when he says "I got drunk on Christmas eve" Although not a TOO rare subject of a song or story, still a good/kind of depressing/funny in a dark humor kind of way. So Then the drums kick in and the song gains a bit more power. The part about leaving his girlfriend is a good addition to the song's composition and the part about Santa passing his house was also going back to that good/kind of depressing/funny in a dark humor kind of way feel to it. Then the second verse, "the sex was good could have asked for more could of got more on a $10 whore". Also keeping the funny in a dark depressing way/JUST depressing. And boom! back into the chorus, stronger than ever and still really good like before. The lyrics for the bridge "we'll do it all again on new years eve" was great, and then then the powerful electric guitar followed by the lyrics "You're a hoe hoe hoe!" was pretty good as well. And then... there's the sad ending. "I got dumped on Christmas eve".
Well man, it was a great song. Hope to hear more from you if all your work is like this or maybe even better. Hope you didn't actually get dumped on Christmas eve though... THAT... would just suck.
anyway, great song, good job, hope to hear more! -Jon J
Thanks man :) .. I appreciate it. always looking to colab on more stuff too, you seem like your probaly into the same stuff that I am. And yes, I did get dumped Christmas eve lolol.. everything I write about happened to me ;D
Commented on Wishes by AidenArrows
This is pretty cool! Will you put some drums etc on it? I could also mix and master it a little bit. And do the screams, when you tell me where they should be! Pretty electronic tough, but its cool!
Commented on Hannah is a HoHoHo Drunk for Christmas by AidenArrows
Nice songs. I agree with the comment from ImpendingDoom about the lyrics.
Regarding the music part... I think the drums could be a bit more "definite" (I am not sure if you want to make them more "punchy" or more "subtle" but currently they are a bit too in-between, IMHO).
And I am not 100% sure about the ending solo, maybe you could try to use some of the good loops you can find 'round here ;-)
But again, nice song.
Domenico
Commented on Hannah is a HoHoHo Drunk for Christmas by AidenArrows
nice guitar at the start. pretty complex sounding, opening vocals, (song name) gives a nice point of what the song's about and the message becomes more clear obviously when he says "I got drunk on Christmas eve" Although not a TOO rare subject of a song or story, still a good/kind of depressing/funny in a dark humor kind of way. So Then the drums kick in and the song gains a bit more power. The part about leaving his girlfriend is a good addition to the song's composition and the part about Santa passing his house was also going back to that good/kind of depressing/funny in a dark humor kind of way feel to it. Then the second verse, "the sex was good could have asked for more could of got more on a $10 whore". Also keeping the funny in a dark depressing way/JUST depressing. And boom! back into the chorus, stronger than ever and still really good like before. The lyrics for the bridge "we'll do it all again on new years eve" was great, and then then the powerful electric guitar followed by the lyrics "You're a hoe hoe hoe!" was pretty good as well. And then... there's the sad ending. "I got dumped on Christmas eve".
Well man, it was a great song. Hope to hear more from you if all your work is like this or maybe even better. Hope you didn't actually get dumped on Christmas eve though... THAT... would just suck.
anyway, great song, good job, hope to hear more!
-Jon J