Wow Natalie, beautiful song, so full of emotion and so very sad. Your voice has a unique tone which worked really well with this song. Let's hear lots more of this please!!
Hello my name is DJMercury and I could use a voice like yours on one of my tracks if you're interested please email me: I loved the song it was touching also do you have the original to the piano beat?
The voice is very correct, but the bass part in the mix has too much intensity, too forward, as the part of some drums also.
Which is for the melodious and very intense part that you have created an andicapte. I understand, that today's music a need for sustained rhythms, but I give you here, just my impression tuned .... There is still work, but it is already well advanced .... You must continue to improve the good track.
Thank you very much for your feedback :-) I hope I will get better and make better tracks. And sometimes it's a little bit difficult to hear what you can do better, when you have worked with it a little bit. But thank you again for taking time to listen and leave a comment. :-) I'll try to mix the bass and the drums better. :)
Classic synth combines with an updated beat to make pure magic. I love this tune! Makes me want to write words and melody to it, and I rarely do that. Faved and downloaded, Great work, keep them coming
Great energy in this track!! Get's me in to a dancingmood immadiately from the start.
It's a bit exhausting on the ears when listening on headphones though - and the flat and thick waveform tells me you tweaked it upp a bit too much - maybe just turn down every level on the mixer and remaster it?
But hey, I've listened to this track maybe four times now and still wanting more - Great job!
Thank you, these tips mean a lot to me!! I had some problems with making songs, and it annoyed me a little bit. And yeah, I noticed it was... Pretty... flat and thick as you say!! So I will definately do that :-) Thank you again, I really really need to know what I can do better.
Wow Natalie there is nothing slow in your progress. That was awesome! Really nicely paced, vox well pitched, everything fit perfectly. Great, great track!!! Def, def one for my ipod.
As soon as I played the track I thought the whole songs going to be like this, I know - pretty quick to judge. Nice track, excellent mixing but not long enough..
The Bass phrasing attracts me to this song. The bridge/chorus is a beautiful lesson in counterpoint of the melody to bass structure. This would be a good song whether it was electronic or was solely guitars. good work!
this is a beautiful piece of piano work sometimes if you are a artist writer etc you find a lot of comfort in what you do to get threw cretin things in your life great job here all the best kerry
Commented on I Met An Alien And Drowned It by natalieilatan
this is very cool...bit like a soundtrack music...could be good for some kinda trailer, too...
Danke
Commented on MARIAMA and AISHA by natalieilatan
it is happy, it has a 70's travel show vibe to it, don't think i'd add a choir to it but some kind of Jack Johnson lyrics. nice
Commented on Apathetic by natalieilatan
May I use this for a cartoon?
Commented on if you only knew by natalieilatan
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Commented on I Dont Need Them Anyway by natalieilatan
this was really cool i liked it.
Commented on if you only knew by natalieilatan
Yep ,got me rockin..Hi 5 from me!.
If i only knew???.....Ummm?....errr?
If i only knew???? nothing...i know nothing lol.
Nice synths....I love Synths.!...cool heavy beats too.!
***BB***
Commented on Untell That Story by natalieilatan
Wow Natalie, beautiful song, so full of emotion and so very sad. Your voice has a unique tone which worked really well with this song. Let's hear lots more of this please!!
K;)
Commented on Untell That Story by natalieilatan
Hello my name is DJMercury and I could use a voice like yours on one of my tracks if you're interested please email me: I loved the song it was touching also do you have the original to the piano beat?
Commented on A Wishlist by natalieilatan
sound very nice :)
Commented on A Wishlist by natalieilatan
Oh WOW, Natalie!!
This is great - a really good dubstep track! And the melody is just awesome, liked this a lot.
Good job, girl!
Commented on A Wishlist by natalieilatan
this is cool !
Commented on Lady gaga - Alejandro REMIX By Natalie Olsen by natalieilatan
Hello Natalie....
The voice is very correct, but the bass part in the mix has too much intensity, too forward, as the part of some drums also.
Which is for the melodious and very intense part that you have created an andicapte.
I understand, that today's music a need for sustained rhythms, but I give you here, just my impression tuned ....
There is still work, but it is already well advanced .... You must continue to improve the good track.
Dan
Commented on The sunset stage by natalieilatan
Classic synth combines with an updated beat to make pure magic. I love this tune! Makes me want to write words and melody to it, and I rarely do that. Faved and downloaded, Great work, keep them coming
Commented on I Dont Need Them Anyway by natalieilatan
Good girl for working with FL
Thats way beyond my standars lol...i us magix!
This is a very nice track,it made me smile so good work!
Commented on Apathetic by natalieilatan
Definitely a moving piece! I used to play cello, but I was never this good! Awesome piano playing! Would really be good in a film! Nice one!
Commented on Nobody Loving Me But You Ft Patricia Edwards by natalieilatan
Great energy in this track!! Get's me in to a dancingmood immadiately from the start.
It's a bit exhausting on the ears when listening on headphones though - and the flat and thick waveform tells me you tweaked it upp a bit too much - maybe just turn down every level on the mixer and remaster it?
But hey, I've listened to this track maybe four times now and still wanting more - Great job!
Commented on Nobody Loving Me But You Ft Patricia Edwards by natalieilatan
Wow Natalie there is nothing slow in your progress. That was awesome! Really nicely paced, vox well pitched, everything fit perfectly. Great, great track!!! Def, def one for my ipod.
Commented on Apathetic by natalieilatan
Beautiful song. I might just add a little to it. If you don't mind?
Commented on I Dont Need Them Anyway by natalieilatan
As soon as I played the track I thought the whole songs going to be like this, I know - pretty quick to judge. Nice track, excellent mixing but not long enough..
Enjoy.
Commented on The sunset stage by natalieilatan
Natalieilatan to #ESC next year??? For norway??+ Beautiful girl, fantastic musik. Gratz from poland. please for music for me.
Commented on The sunset stage by natalieilatan
love 8-bit synths, improve a lot the song
Commented on The sunset stage by natalieilatan
This is so awesome! Great choice of sounds! Excellent mixing and arrangement! Loved it!
Commented on The sunset stage by natalieilatan
The Bass phrasing attracts me to this song. The bridge/chorus is a beautiful lesson in counterpoint of the melody to bass structure. This would be a good song whether it was electronic or was solely guitars. good work!
Commented on The sunset stage by natalieilatan
Im really like the beat on this track very cool. almost sounds like a music track you would hear in old video games.
Commented on Apathetic by natalieilatan
this is a beautiful piece of piano work sometimes if you are a artist writer etc you find a lot of comfort in what you do to get threw cretin things in your life great job here
all the best
kerry